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Pretty good shit, nice drop, cept I thought you left the site for good? oh well, the comeback has begun then I guess, lol, like how you got on C.A.L.I, good shit, nice verse, liked this line the most:
Quick and sly in my battles, I’m rising to the top without yall Shit, I’ll dodge yah shots like a kid who’s a virgin to alcohol overall good drop, nice way to comeback... 7.5/10 return the favor in the sig.... |
I'll hit it up another time. I'm tired as fuck right now. But believe me Ill hit it up thanks for the feedback. Peace
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Bump. This. Up. There.
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definately had some good lines in there...killed it wit metas and wordplay...and personals....I actually read it all...it kept me interested...
dont know you...but ur consistent.......................................s o far uppin...rtf on my name |
You don't know me? =\ just look up L.I.
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lol L.I. just got back and already rippin on cali
nice shit man gettin them personals in there now i love wordplay and i saw alot in here nice shit consistant verse throughout when i saw the title i though it was going to be a topical open mic but then i was like ahhh lol nice shit man, glad your back |
Damn L.I welcome back , dope peice
I was really feeling it alot.. Your structure was good .. You had lots of feeling , and nice emotions in ya drop You really took time to make this good , and it show'd Overall this was a dope peice... and glad to have you back and hope to see another OM' from you later on |
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Best hit one up :shoot: .... :thumbup: |
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i like ur writing style...but, with lines this extended, u need more internal multies to hold my interest...personally
ne way...good flow...strong word choice I liked it 1 |
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this was nice L.I, creative n put together well, i agree with Q
it would help ya flow out if ya had more inners in there,but hey...i think everyone knows you top shelf when talents mentioned on rv.... stay up man...this shit was a real good read...n i liked the personals funny shit all around....appreciate it if ya RTF.....PZ |
Damn i ain't got nothin to say but I.L. is at it again keep it up playa
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pretty decent piece...
...flow was kinda good here some was a lil too long tho... ...had some punches in there that was aight, but overall decent... ...drop though...7/10 |
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