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Master Minded 04-03-05 07:43 PM

Pretty good shit, nice drop, cept I thought you left the site for good? oh well, the comeback has begun then I guess, lol, like how you got on C.A.L.I, good shit, nice verse, liked this line the most:

Quick and sly in my battles, I’m rising to the top without yall
Shit, I’ll dodge yah shots like a kid who’s a virgin to alcohol

overall good drop, nice way to comeback... 7.5/10

return the favor in the sig....

L.I.3 04-03-05 07:45 PM

I'll hit it up another time. I'm tired as fuck right now. But believe me Ill hit it up thanks for the feedback. Peace

L.I.3 04-04-05 03:10 PM

Bump. This. Up. There.

Adrenaline 04-04-05 03:37 PM

definately had some good lines in there...killed it wit metas and wordplay...and personals....I actually read it all...it kept me interested...
dont know you...but ur consistent.......................................s o far

uppin...rtf on my name

L.I.3 04-04-05 06:27 PM

You don't know me? =\ just look up L.I.

...Voke... 04-04-05 08:46 PM

lol L.I. just got back and already rippin on cali
nice shit man gettin them personals in there
now i love wordplay and i saw alot in here nice shit
consistant verse throughout when i saw the title i though
it was going to be a topical open mic but then i was like ahhh
lol nice shit man, glad your back

Kawn Flixx 04-05-05 02:05 AM

Damn L.I welcome back , dope peice
I was really feeling it alot..
Your structure was good ..
You had lots of feeling , and nice emotions in ya drop
You really took time to make this good , and it show'd
Overall this was a dope peice... and glad to have you back
and hope to see another OM' from you later on

Master Minded 04-05-05 07:50 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by I.L.
I'll hit it up another time. I'm tired as fuck right now. But believe me Ill hit it up thanks for the feedback. Peace


Best hit one up :shoot: .... :thumbup:

L.I.3 04-06-05 05:57 PM

Upping..................

Tha Q 04-06-05 07:24 PM

i like ur writing style...but, with lines this extended, u need more internal multies to hold my interest...personally


ne way...good flow...strong word choice


I liked it



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L.I.3 04-08-05 06:33 PM

Word....upping.......................

¤ÐÅž¤ 04-08-05 07:02 PM

this was nice L.I, creative n put together well, i agree with Q
it would help ya flow out if ya had more inners in there,but
hey...i think everyone knows you top shelf when talents mentioned on rv....
stay up man...this shit was a real good read...n i liked the personals
funny shit all around....appreciate it if ya RTF.....PZ

Scarface 04-08-05 07:25 PM

Damn i ain't got nothin to say but I.L. is at it again keep it up playa

L.I.3 04-09-05 01:04 AM

word..........................upping

Sik Wit It 04-09-05 03:22 AM

pretty decent piece...
...flow was kinda good here
some was a lil too long tho...
...had some punches in there
that was aight, but overall decent...
...drop though...7/10


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