all that is great and whatnot so uppin this battle

what are you talkin aabout??? aye... go vote on some battles so we can get this closed...i voted on like 5 already and didnt get any returned votes...

get these votes poppin yall this battle needs to get closed

this needs to hurry up and get closed so uppin----

uppin this for my man.........

upp this battle up lets get some votes************

goodamn vote on this shit yall noe damn well at the top off front lines yall see dis..;.so click on it damn

get votes in here so we can close this yall--------

uppinnnnnnnnnn like a bitch..
go vote muhfucka^^^

This was feedback posted for DoContinue
 

I thought about battlin a herb but who better to choose
no sense in wastin 5 credits if u know that you'll lose
OK.....
Ya rhymes is preschool all patty-cakes and rattles
thimk u gangsta? just coz KIN-Ethic declined ur battle
Set-up was more of a punch then the second line..
losing to this nigga is like losing to a "SUBTLE" fag
i'll treat like gym clothes carried in a duffle bag
eh........
u supposed to be a flyweight? ha ur just new to da game
why view poll results there aint gonna be 100% by ya name
ok...........
my personals are like "dunks" ill posterize this guy
call me "IMAGETITAN" coz u beneath me like a posted reply
post/post, but still ok...
Ludacris? nah but my lyrics make u say "oh" like a Ciara music video
after the poll is closed ill still be here "continuing" on this "hoe"
nah..............


This kid needs help, i told him his vocab need "raisin"
so he got fruity, wrote a verse, and then threw grapes in
ha.........word...
yo ass get layed out, wit gats you sprayed out
like every house party punch, ya shit's kid n' played out
ok.......
golden shellz's a punk coward, know that he aint beatin me
he like the simpsons, yellow bellied and erased easily...
nice........
ya style's as dusted as the front lines in IRAQ
like warren sapp, you'll be retired wit two nines to ya back
nice.........
besides the fact that you 'dumb', you cant speak clearly
battles in text but got tha nerve to holla "nobody's hearin me"
ok....
but feel renewal, you could shine wit a pound of a jewel....
but rappin wit LIL JOHN wouldn't issue you the sound of approval
ok.......
(YEAAAAAH!)
im livin tha truth, hittin you goofs, my sound heavy like thunder
assemble ya troops? but like you suspended from math class.... you already "out-numbered"
ok closer...

Basically docontinue had some nice spins on some potentially stale subject matter...the simpsons and grapes verses i thought had a good flow and were original....

get some votes in here only 1 head voted so get some more in here

yo uppin this battle for more votes yall..........

Voted For: Golden shellz

haha golden took this


DC your verse was to forced while GS was very smooth in its delievery . overall i thought the punches were witty with gs and had alot of punch . this is really a no brainer i'ma have to say you really put this guy away by your utter disregard for his pride .... lol my favorite line
"Ya rhymes is preschool all patty-cakes and rattles
thimk u gangsta? just coz KIN-Ethic declined ur battle"

that had me chuckl'n ha but yea Gs takes this easy
Vote// GS RTF link is in the sig

cmon yall uppin this battle for more votes they are greatly appreaciated

ayyo uppin this battle for more votes now`````````