Ok listening....u need a de-esser bad....ya vocals is too loud....yea addlibs are even louder than ya vocals like the gunshot sample......ya rhyme scheme is real basic...you sticking wit same scheme though out.......the lyrics had alot of personals worded badly....they woulda been so much harder if u worded them better...u where jus making statements about him instead of actually dissing him.....2nd cat's quality is wack....an he got a strong accent & he is rushing & stumbling on his words....so half of what he said I missed....his flow was off then would be on for a second then go right back off....his delivery was really lacking...he was emotionless....very dull delivery...gotta up that playa....lyrics I can't coment on couldn't make out all u said.....1

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igght man i appriciate the feed i have been elevateing on my tracks each time i make one soo yeh... i have been worknig on tht shit ya sed... am rtf now man pz