peepin. i like the gurl singin. is that some one on tha beatsample or did she record with u? flow starts out nyce. best flow from u i heard yet. yea u improved alot from ur old tracks. vocals mite need some more volume. the girl is sexy. def adds a good vibe to tha track. much better than ur old shit. flow is on point. the only thing u lack is great lyrics. keep elevatin, ur gettin better.

pleez return tha fav cuz

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=185143

Listenin'...Hmm...a love song...

I ain' feelin' the beat...Hmm...nice flow...nice emotion...good voice quality...Nice hook...who does your hook? Does that come wit the beat..? Nice track overall...keep it up, we should collab one time...

*listenin*

WOW!! this is dope actually sounds like a proper single if u no what i meen... lyrics is good... flow is onb point all the way through quality is well good... how u get it that good man i cant do shit wit my quality.. overall thias drap is dope... keep droppin em man

This post cost me nothing.

Listening on lo-fi:...nice intro good choice of beat nice Fabolous beat...flow is good rhythm on point topic also on point...rhyming is nice it's always a bonus when you don't have to do hooks yaself lol...singing of course is dope...not you obviously lol...2nd verse keepin it strong i'm feelin it much...good song got that R&B feel to it...keep droppin SPL...where "U" go?... :thumbup:...RTF

I forgot about "U" ;) lol but thanks man. I got you on the favor.

and thanks for all the other feed.

and no, the singing wasn't on the beat. It was part of the original Fabolous song, but I used my great loopin' skills :cool: , to loop it into the beat and make it 2 verses instead of 3.

and props to DOoms for the upp, knew I could get you to do it for me. appreciate it nigga. ;)