This was feedback posted for diman
 

i think i already voted on this.....so i will check to polls......

ps, im dope :)/d, you still down with the crew?

quiet foo! it was a stupid punch either way/that wasn't wordplay, it was word abuse....suckah!

Voted For: diman

easy vote here, diman came harder in every catogary, no hate meta, but you need to step up ya game! rtf links in sig!

really need a vote in this mother, seriously yall....

Voted For: diman

leave shells in diman,like his moms when they got taco night/
you aint eatin me in battle kid, im pretty tough to bite/
^^whack,flow sucked too
you's a whack nigga only time you was diman/
is when you agreed to drink your brothers semen/
^^whack,didn't rhyme,if ya said semAn,it would have.But ya said semen
see man im to nasty for you, like black jellybeans/
raps not in u like a nigga wearing wrangler,its not your genes/
^^Did ya dss urself in tha setup?w/e...whack
u whack head and shoulders,the only time u win by a hair/
so respon if u dare/
Wtf?^^^worse line.

Conclusion-obviously,you are newb.So go read tutorials and practice.Keep ya eyes,ears...all 5 senses open at all times.Keep a notebook and write down ideas.Use personals in the future.Keep workin.

meta udilizing a W, is like Soc favorin skriptz.
thinkin his words are weapons, yea like 50 with paper clips.
^^Ok i guess
its not nature its...emabarrassing, that sig of yours.
i feel like its english class. lesson one, tackle the metaphor.
^^mediocre personal
its been said before, but i truely will take this quickly.
ya like a graphic battle, ya drop ya best & still wont diss me.
^^umm...Somewat decent
i feel like debo, for no reason i wanna inflict a beating.
a battle with meta?... homework sounds more intriguing.
^^ OK
ya not clearly thinking, like a spur of the moment wife.
im mean shit, how gangsta is naming yaself after a poetic device?
^^best line tha verse.Nice way to rip on the name.

Conclusion-U would have been murdered against a quality texcee.But u went against a newb.Which ain't cool.U gon get a free win in ya record for this shit.That's Pussy.Fo real.

Vote-Deman~1~