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DQ 04-23-05 06:04 AM

^Thanks for explained vote, the honest favor will be returned !

Upping for some more...

DQ

DQ 04-24-05 12:10 PM

Uppity Uppity Up! Let's get some votes in here...

DQ

DQ 04-26-05 04:06 PM

Come on peeps, vote vote vote!

Uppity Up Up

DQ

DQ 04-28-05 02:27 PM

Uuuuuuuuuuuuuupping!!!!!!!!! Vooooooooooooooooote

DQ

DQ 04-29-05 01:44 PM

Upping this battle once again, come on people, just fucking vote!

DQ 04-30-05 05:35 AM

Uppin upping upping, let's vote in this one people!

DQ

King Solo 04-30-05 10:23 AM

Voted For: Drama Queen

DQ................another nice drop from ya.........structure was top and flow was on point throughout.........ya stayed on topic all the way through, good shit........i was feelin ya verse, ya had a lot of nice feeling to it and ya vocab was decent, not a basic drop, ya had some complex stuff going on......i like the topic idea to, not easy to write about but ya pulled it off well.....i liked the 2nd part to ya drop better but overall it was a tight drop 8/10

diman..........you had a nice drop to, ya structure was tight, ya shit flowed well throughout although not as fluid as DQ's verse was. i was feelin ya verse to man, ya had some real emotion in ya drop and i think ya started it off brilliantly. ya vocab was nice, nuthin overly basic so props there......the one thing i think is that even though ya verse was dope throughout i think nearer to the end it seems like there is less effort into it and the emotion and feeling isnt as strong so overall i gotta give this 7/10

V/ - Drama Queen

Return the favour!!!!!
Links in my siggy!!!!!!

DQ 04-30-05 10:36 AM

Thanks for explained vote! Upping for more, uppity up!!!

DQ

....Gone.... 04-30-05 11:21 AM

This was feedback posted for Drama Queen
 
Checking the damn polls, good drop from both of ya'll

DQ 05-03-05 01:39 PM

Uppity Uppity Up Up Uppity Uppity Up Up Uppity Uppity Up Up

Acuity 05-03-05 03:48 PM

Voted For: Drama Queen

Vote : Drama Queen

Diman: your vocab was used flawlessly nothin too complicted and nothing to simplistic, ur structure was shaky but okay, imagery was a bit lacking unlike emotion which poored out...only thing is that this drop was more poetic, it failed in my eyes to actually follow or develop a plot, and it paid little attention to the given topic

Drama Queen: you need to up your vocab, in places it felt like the piece was written by a 2yr old..unlike anxiety in ma eyes u fail to pull of the simplistic approach to language..imagery was well created and vivid, amd as with dimans, emotion poored out...ur structure was concise, precise and flawless..ur topic coverage wa son point...and ur drop foloowed n developed a stroyline..

PEace

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Vote - Drama Queen

Critic 05-06-05 08:41 AM

This was feedback posted for diman
 
Just dropping feedback coz I really can't decided who
one this battle,.. Both come from totally different
angles which was good.

DQ had really nice flow but I wasn't feeling much emotion
unlike Diman had,,.. *Deep shit*

Vocab DQ won that hands down,... Sorry but I really can't
decided who won this,.. but it was a very dope and close
battle stay up both and keep writing..

1~

DQ 05-06-05 02:49 PM

^It's all good, thanks for honest and explained votes/feedback y'all!

Mad Dog 05-07-05 06:51 AM

Voted For: Drama Queen

I think that Drama Queen got this battle because i feel that Drama Queen came stronger in the following categories...Topic i felt Drama Queen got it was effective and was on point diman u shoulda been a bit more creative on this occasion rhyming i felt went to Drama Queen good lookin wordplay and creativity goes to Drama Queen and flow and structure i'll give to Drama Queen.

V/Drama Queen There's my sig be sure to return the favour honestly within 3 days or vote removed :thumbup:

DQ 05-07-05 06:57 AM

Two return the favors for same battle, already checked it out but I'ma have to listen few times to decide who got it. Nice audio battle right there!


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