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Voted For: Jon Shells

yo this battle was real good vote for shells tho

lyrics and metas was both of yall

both of yall had ounches and i enjoyed them both

wordplay goes to warrior
structure goes to both
personals goes to shells

good job both of you this was hard to judge...i dnt know nether of you so this is not a dick ride vote...

Voted For: warrior

shells: sorry man..don't think any of yer lines hit very hard...a couple were kinda bearable, but overall wasn't feelin yer verse. good you used played on his name though...but what was with tha piss test obsession at tha end??

warrior: you had better multis (some a lil forced, but fuck it) and that helped yer flow..right up to the last 3 lines which were wack as fuck and completely out of place. otherwise, you're verse was alright...

both verses fairly equal in name-flips, and both had equally wack endings, but overall i'd have to go with warrior as he edged it on flow and was feelin a few more of his lines (especially tha first 4).

Voted For: warrior

Vote= Warrior
Reason being... his punches were harder and more creative. his nameplays were nice. although i've heard them b4 on other sites. Shells came with generic punches and a lot of filler. and the very few punches he had were weak. not that creative at all. both need work but this was aiight

Voted For: warrior

warrior

i tend~to~win~fights, take a stab im bendin~ya~knife/
u like a fallin soldier, the way "war's" endin~ya~life/
^^^DECENT OPENER
u either brave or stupid, most herbs would refuse~to~respond/
im shittin on shell's, i guess u could say im usin~the~'jon'/
^^^HAHAHAHA IM LOVIN DAT LINE VERY TYTE LINE
RV's losin a pawn, yall eggin him on, im X'ing~him~out/
cause im the type to waste shell's like im eggin~ya~house/
^^^IIGHT
more wordplay on ya name then u got in ya whole~weak~verse/
im gon be the winner(winter) so im endin ya career like u sold~T-shirts/
^^^PRETTY NICE LINE
i take it easy on herbs to give em hope/
leavin "jon" dead like this kids the pope/
bitch im dope, u better pray to God u get a vote/
^^^AVERAGE CLOSURE

warrior- i liked ur verse, there were lotz of punches and personals, the closure with three lines wasnt that great, u shud've stuck to the two lines to close it, i can tell u elevated

BEST LINE- u either brave or stupid, most herbs would refuse~to~respond/
im shittin on shell's, i guess u could say im usin~the~'jon'/
HA HA HA HA HA MY FAVORITE LINE OF UR VERSE
9/10


jon shellls

Let’s get straight to the point don’t got time to water ya./
Just exposing fake thugs, in his case a fake Warrior./ (1)
^^^MEH... IIGHT
Hard on the outside, inside soft like and Oreo./
He tried out for The Top Model show, he showed me his Portfolio./ (2)
^^^ANOTHA....MEH
And who ever gased him, over charged him./
Now he’s hungry for a win, Shells gon over starve him./ (3)
^^^O.K
Ya secret is you wanna be a singer, but you settle for rapping./
You wanna tell ya crew but don’t know what would happen./
^^^NOT REALLY FEELIN IT

I’m hot dog, you still trying to Catch up./
Shells Hot Dog leave ya shirt red like Ketchup./ (5)
^^^ATTEMPTED PUNCH PRETTY GOOD
Shells Backed up by Steel Heaters./
I’ma turn ya “Warriors” to my personal Cheerleader’s./ (6)
^^^PRETTY GOOD
The New Guy of the Mafia, the Kid Next./
Selling Weed the same color of a Piss Test./ (7)
^^^IIGHT
Shot you in the leg, make ya bitch drink my piss test./
Throw ya bitch on you so ya’ll can get a little kiss test./ (8)
^^^MEH CLOSURE


jon shells- not really feelin ur vers homie. since we fam ima tell u like dis, elevate sum more, come up wit more lyrical word choice, work on ur diction. ur punches were weak so work on those and u b str8
6.5/10

cant vote b/c we crew

if i cud vote
MY V/WARRIOR

cud u please rtf on mah battle vs. Showtime(link in sig)
itz been open 4eva n ppl aint votin
please holla back wit good feedback and a vote 4 da betta battler
HOLLA!

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ay change dat vote 2 feedback
i cant vote b.c jon iz in mah crew
i accidentaly pressed vote 4 warrior insteead of feedback
my bad yall!

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Voted For: warrior

Nicer style better punches and nice structure.......Homie uptop had it good too but the Warrior took it home swingin dat battle axe. Both of yall keep doing yall thang