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I'll give this a 9/10 actually... lol after reading it again
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Damn daz this was dope..
ha i was really feeling the hot multies... nice wordplay.. alittle short , would have been alittle better if it was alittle longer You uses lots of feeling,i thank you for taken time out to actually put together a nice verse... Overall couldnt have expected any less of a verse from you nice job.. keep it up hope to see some more work from you |
uppin one last tyme.............
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Yo, Daz... check your Yahoo email.. I emailed you.. THIS GAY MAC wont lemme email you.. i have to be on the DELL.. ugh.. well. yeah.. check it and himm up..
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lol, decent stuff, good vocab an used multies too good effect, ''stomp-in or stoppin lessons''...thats worthy of a quote right there, good stuff, each line came across as somewhat of a random statement if u feel me?...wordplay was on point, If this was ''the source'' i'd be givin you like 4 out of 5 mics lol, keep 'em comin homeboy
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yea this was a dope OM....i was feelin the use of multis u had sick wordplay wit good vocab....i give this drop 9/10 def one the best i've seen lately....good drop Famz....1
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Nice verse...flow & structure on point like whoa!...rhyming real good some decent stuff in there you kept your topic nicely on point this was anice piece to read feelin it much...again ima say get on audio coz ya text if definitely ready to step to mp3 :thumbup:
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Up Up Up,.......^^i Will Record Today(no Hang Over) Uppin
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Wow, days later and still gettin' feed back.. :crazyness: Im working on some new shit. I read this again and as I said before. Just get more into this okay!
R.A.P ^^^ Rythem And Poetry! You got this Fam! Lemme see more iight. I wanna do a poem w/ you. Really. You know what I can do and my style. Hit me up w/ a verse/topic and Ill have it to you in two days.. Late Sweft |
nice. i got the mad man sense from this. nice work vocab was good flow on point. u doing ya thing... keep up the good work
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ya THIS HAS BEEN SLEPT ON SOMETHING FEIRCE....
./ FROM YA FEEDBACK IM SURE YOUB DIDNT GET IT, BUT HEY THATS KOO,...NOT EVERYONE DOES.,........... |
werd....didn't know ya had it in you like that, DAZ!!!! hot lil topic...liked the mad version of multies...OMB might wanna holla at ya for this one..lol... shyt was cool...kinda got lost in the ramblings in the beginning but that's a good thing being that this is what it was supposed to be about...lol...good shyt par
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much appreciated ig.uppin i guess for more feed......
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Dope tittle.. Nice multi's wordplay and meta's too. The flow sounded "unique.''
I liked that last line the best. "My questionable’s…at this time seem sensible to mine Ramblings are signs.. that a madman exists within my mind" Keep up the dopeness |
Uppin This, Not Quite A Throwback But Meh....
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