neway...........uppin for some feedback

uppin this joint

up up up uppin it up

uppin this joint
__________________

uppin this joint
__________________
__________________

82 views... 0 feedback... nice

yea that rules...its a 0:82 ratio lol...

THIS AINT NO BEEF FORUM !! BEEF AGAIN AND I'LL BAN ALL OF YOU FROM OM'S

Now ...this was an okay drop...
Not the best ive seen ... you structure's were good
hook was decent...could have been alot better..
psome punch's were okaY..some were just plain weak..
overall maybe if you use alittle more punchlines..
and use alittle feeling , and some emotions you might be going through..
and you'll have a dope drop..

PS: Drop a link ro this will be closed

uppin for feedback.....................................

uppin this joint
__________________
__________________

Aye Mayne Yall Fuck All Da Hataz

You Came out Yall did A Good callabo and Your bringing back somethin that was laid to rest and Your ddoin a damn good job at it if you ask me
dont let them Hataz knock you down Stay up

Stay Upp

RTF Please in my OM

"I'll sleep wit ya girl and sue her esophagus for custody"

"and all yall niggas talkin shit, is the last to shoot me
will i smack you rudely?....HA absolutely"

one werd....sikk....gotta give 'spec where itz due

Weerd...Hot shit all the way around...One of the dopest verses I've ever seen out of OSB and Big City...Fire yall...And LFS...loved it homie...Great work you guys...Uppin this for my boys...1

uppin this joint
__________________
__________________

hotshitt...I was especially feeling BC's verse. But all were dope. Nice drop OSB....good collab. I didn't think it tied good wit tha song, but w/e. Nice originality on it.

7/10


uppin