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can't vote but pretty good drop by both,
lay-text, i didnt quite feel you stayed on topic
but it was still a koo read,...gd, your closer was mad ill
pulled your whole piece together....liked it, good stuff
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good luck to both

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Voted For: Lay-Text

hotness right here..................

one of the best topicals i ever seen............

Golden Dayz.............first off, i keep sayin it and no one explains why ppl super size they writin.........anyway ya structure was tight and shit, ya flow wasn't perfect, there were some spots when it fell off and i had to re read lines to get back with the rhythm........the overall feel of ya drop was amazing.....the feeling and emotional input you got in there is cool, another topical where ya can clearly see that ya tried in this battle........the vocab was decent in there to although i feel ya could get more complex with that shit to make an even better drop, ya imagery of thoughts was cool and everythin............overall 8/10


Lay-Text...................you impress me every time you drop a topical..........i expect this kind of dopeness from ya.........the structure was tight like fuck which helped ya drop flow great........no parts where it fell off like Golden Dayz...........the vocab was complex like hell....i never seen so many big words and the way you rhymed shit was cool....a few multies in there to near the start........i think the feel to ya verse was just that little bit better cuz i think you put down ya thoughts better and ya spit had that little bit extra, prolly down to the overwhelming vocab you use......but in the long run i think this was a near perfect drop so i give it an overall...........9/10

Dope Battle From Both.
Lay-Text just took this one for me!!!!

V/ - Lay-Text

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Voted For: Lay-Text

meh this battle was pretty good.. not the best i have seen.. but decent. i really couldnt pick up on a nice rhyme scheme from golden... both of u over-vocabbed a bit.. but some of lay-text's lines really came with nice imagery.. overall good emotion from both.. R- i really like how u got the reader involved into ur piece. meh decent battle but vote goes to LT.. just cause he came with a bit more imagery and just a nicer verse all around..