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This was feedback posted for +Tommy Gunz+
 

just fo a little FB
Lyrical Mage shit was tite
Tommy yo shit was as good

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Voted For: +Tommy Gunz+

If I did'nt read the qouted version I would have to say u suck ass but naw U took this easily Gunz you acually had some hard punches in there somewhere

Mage: You had okay stuff too and by tha way tommy work on you stucture its fucked almost beyond fixing both Mc's stay up

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This was feedback posted for lyrical mage
 

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

what the fuck does that mean good or bad funny lil nigga

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Voted For: +Tommy Gunz+

what sage U tricked me How tha hell youa lyrical mage/
Man You like a dummy in class not on the same page/
Weak opening..
*olympic flows* even if u did elevate u'll git *high
jumped* wit tha torch/
no *bullshit* u a practical joke gittin put in a flaming bag n gittin stomped on a porch/
Alright...
Call mah verse jail tyme kid git ready to serve a life sentence/
mage tha only way u wuz hott in u wuz fired on the apprentice/
Nah...
mah nigga tha type that lose by a vote in a battle and wont be uppin shit/
after u git bitchslapped ya face will be in mah hand like tha Arby's oven mitt/
Ha, I actually laughed on that one..
fuck you Imma techer and I got a sick felling you did'nt learn nothing/
you would'nt win this shit if you looked at mah verse and use tha qoute button/
Good...
sorry this did'nt last long and i had to fuck u up quick/
where u from they all about Seriously Sucking Dick/
OK, since it was a personal..

I'm not even going to quote lyrical mage's shit...way too simplistic to be taken seriously, no depth, basic rhymes, pre-K shit...

nigga/trigga hell/shells lotion/ocean face/face....you get the picture...

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