Voted For: D523

ayo u got it.......rhymes where better and better punches.......simple.......and guess homie didnt have his mind and heart into it like he said

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thanks for votin! uppin for some more votes

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Voted For: D523

Votin for D


ight this battle was close on all accounts of the battle

but i favored D's verse due to his creativity

ight

D
Punches were creativen hard hittin
strucutre was nice
flow was good and easy to keep wit
wordplay was creative
multies- didnt see any elevate on those
Personals- Creative n hard hittin

ur bes line:
Your teeth are cracked from bitin those lines, this kids a rookie i got a hunch
Because all of his lines are like the old Batman movies-- "Wack" "Punch"
(lol made me cuckle nice n creative)

One
ight ya had hard punches but some were a lil basic try to get a lil more creative on them
structure was nice n easy to stay wit
flow was nice n easy as well
multies- I didnt see any elevate on those
personals didnt see any man elevate on them

both elevate on multies

D had hard punches n a few hard hittin personals
one ya didnt throw any personals so it made me turn away from your verse

damn good battle from the both of you but the votes goes to D for creative punches and personals

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Voted For: OneStepBeyond

ey yo man i had to give it to ONESTEP juss
cause his whole verse flowed betta and he
had betta shit all da way dawg.....

wanna be an internet gangsta, well the semi opens sluts souls,
M.O.B. is a bunch of faggots... With Many Open Buttholes,
i fucked with you and Ca$per, but i think im givin up in two sec.'s,
cause if i fuck with 1 i fuck with all, and i ain't fond of group sex...

ey dawg dat shit was funny as hell....haha.....D....u had some nice punches but ya structa was weak dawg..no hate....and check yo p.m's boy i been tryin to battle yo ass.....no hate ....holla

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i know kid lol i said set it up

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i wanna know one thing...

your open mic is washed up, its not somethin they wana try to see,
cause after 5 hours of droppin the shit, the only reply was me,

is that true? you were the only one to reply to his open mic?

oh sorry...i thought i could vote after i left feedback

well i was going to vote for: OneStepBeyond

Yes it was true...................................

:: bump :: :) cmon vote on this shit

<-Tired of gettin robbed out of wins. Just fucking vote.

Voted For: D523

Pretty weak battle but i think d523 got this one...osb just came wack ... nothing much to say about this could have been alot better

D523
Hi guys, Im One Step Beyond, I think imma good emcee and a hardcore thug
I see my rhymes as dope, but then again i overdose on hallucinogenic drugs
Decent Opener
Your teeth are cracked from bitin those lines, this kids a rookie i got a hunch
Because all of his lines are like the old Batman movies-- "Wack" "Punch"
Could have been alot better

Im sure you can envision how my words hit with precision
My shit will effect you like glaucoma, you'll loose your vision
Nice punch good multies
You can call me a bookie, the way i took bets for me to win against this rookie
Ill have you dismembered, crumbling apart like a soggy cookie
pretty cool , nice meta
We all look at your lines, and we cant help but laugh humorously
Stupid bitch, you are right, you are One Step Beyond.. stupidity
LOL
Ten lines and i merked you, I know you like the shit i spit
So after this battle if you want my verse, ill give you it
Nice closer , but alittle self glorious

OSB
plan on doin somethin with your life, but you'll fail college,
thats why this 'bitch blows' like he was dryin his nail polish,
Weak Opener
doctors scope the situation, but fail to give you enough stitches,
got the premature flow, cause if i get 'touched' i 'BUST' BITCHES,
WHat?!
your open mic is washed up, its not somethin they wana try to see,
cause after 5 hours of droppin the shit, the only reply was me,
okay personal
your wholes crews hypocrites, casper thinks he the Capitain Thug,
and you said i talk shit and i do, but atleast i can back it up,
NO, wack
wanna be an internet gangsta, well the semi opens sluts souls,
M.O.B. is a bunch of faggots... With Many Open Buttholes,
Nice , best line in your verse
i fucked with you and Ca$per, but i think im givin up in two sec.'s,
cause if i fuck with 1 i fuck with all, and i ain't fond of group sex...
decent closer

Overall D523 got this he came with harder punchlines , Osb just came played and weak , if osb came harder, he would have one this battle , but ima have to to hand this one to d523 ... keep it up and elevate both

Voted For: OneStepBeyond

I think OSB's punches were more affective. I think his hit harder. I liked the diss's in this battle, and the structure is on point for OSB. D523, your flow was wayy off. Esp, at the bigging. But, I was feelin OSB's punches and concepts more, adding his wordplay to that list, so I felt he took this one. Not really a close battle to me, i think OSB took it. D523 didnt really have too many hard hitting punches, and is personals were kinda off. Well, I tried my best to explain this. Pretty much nothing more to say except OSB's concepts, consistency, and punches took my vote.


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