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N.Tavarez 04-16-05 03:34 PM

This was feedback posted for J DOT
 
nice battle, checking polls.........................

Germ 04-16-05 04:13 PM

This was feedback posted for 9th Degree
 
meh, dont really feel like voting, sorry, lol....prett good battle, both came with some decent lines.....i dont understand your (jdot) escalade line though

20 GraND 04-16-05 09:47 PM

Voted For: J DOT

This was pretty much j dot, cuz he had much more creative lines, and more punches...
9th degree was way to basic in my opinion, jdot was kinda basic but betta than 9th.
i liked the last few lines of J's thats what won it for me

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Bangalore 04-17-05 02:09 AM

This was feedback posted for J DOT
 
checkn polls...can't vote..............................

LyricalMa$tamind 04-17-05 12:20 PM

Voted For: J DOT

j dot

I read ya other battle, tha herbs you face stay old
They compare 9th Degree to being hot(burnt), when 9 degrees is cold
^^^PRETTY GOOD
Even if I had tha wackest lines, I would get merits still
Cause 9th degree riding my dick like a Ferris wheel
^^^HA HA IIGHT LINE
I scare and kill, You don’t elevate cause yo thread gets replies
Cause only side ya record will escalade, is on the right side
^^^O.K
You could “B COMING” for me, and still wouldn’t “ROCK” me “FELLA”*
I’ma wait til tha end of my sentence’, before I ‘DOT’ ya fella
^^^NICE CREATIVE LINE
Go acapella….Fuck a limelight, ya bulb ran out
1,000 gay dudes in a crowd, and 9th would still stand out
^^^HA GOOD 1
I don’t wana cope wit ya skills… I scope and kill
I could be robbed for my “drugs” and be tha 'dope'st still
^^^NICE CLOSURE

J DOT- I LIKED UR VERSE IT WUZ VERY CREATIVE AND THE PUNCHES HIT HARD. I LIKED UR STRUCTURE AND GOOD WORD CHOICE. UR PERSONALS WERE HITTIN WHICH WUZ ALSO GOOD. I LIKED HOW U ELEVATED IN THIS BATTLE TO REALLY TRY N MURK UR OPPONENT.
8.5/10

9TH DEGREE

I could go on and on about who you're worse than
But you're ahead of 9th...'cuz you always talk in the 3rd person
^^O.K
So you're the only one who says "J's hot", but thug shit is played, Dot
Runnin' up your bar tab is the only time you take shots
^^ HA HA REAL NICE LINE
Get breaked off, acceptin' this battle you shoulda been cautious
'Cuz the best checks you get are at the welfare office
^^^ NICE 1
Deny you're a Shawn Carter d/r, but it's plain to see
That while you wanna be Jay your verses make us all Z...
^^^ IIGHT


*snore* ...huh, what? oh, sorry bout that.

Wow, talk about being slept on, but I'll tell you what you need to shine

you're wack
Nah, matter of fact, just learn to read between the lines
^^^WEAK CLOSURE

9TH DEGREE- THIS WUZ A REAL CLOSE BATTLE. I LIKED UR VERSE ALOT 9TH. THERE WERE MANY PUNCHES AND PERSONALS. UR STRUCTURE WUZ STR8 SO I CUD READ IT EASY. OVERALL U JUS NEED 2 ELEVATE A LITTLE BIT MO DATZ ALL 8/10

REAL CLOSE BATTLE
NO HATE 2 NO1

V/J DOT

CUD U RTF ON DA BATTLE IN MY SIG YALL. PLEASEE LEAVE AN HONEST VOTE AND FEEDBACK 4 WHO U THINK WON.

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Nynth Degree 04-17-05 12:34 PM

WTF? Why does J Dot even have 1 vote? "9 degree is cold" lines are played as fuck, been used against me in damn near every battle. Gay lines...don't even get me started on the gay lines. And self-glory is crap also.
Quote:
Originally Posted by Faggy McFaggerson
Wow, talk about being slept on, but I'll tell you what you need to shine

you're wack
Nah, matter of fact, just learn to read between the lines
^^^WEAK CLOSURE

That wasn't even my closer, dumbshit.

Germ 04-17-05 01:07 PM

^ lyrical mastermind does not know how to vote, thats why..........

Compose 04-17-05 01:45 PM

Voted For: 9th Degree

I read ya other battle, tha herbs you face stay old
They compare 9th Degree to being hot(burnt), when 9 degrees is cold
nah...really weak sorry
Even if I had tha wackest lines, I would get merits still
Cause 9th degree riding my dick like a Ferris wheel
weak simile cuz it doesnt really make sense, the line is like sayin ferris wheels ride dicks which idk
I scare and kill, You don’t elevate cause yo thread gets replies
Cause only side ya record will escalade, is on the right side
same...weak
You could “B COMING” for me, and still wouldn’t “ROCK” me “FELLA”*
I’ma wait til tha end of my sentence’, before I ‘DOT’ ya fella
better then the others
Go acapella….Fuck a limelight, ya bulb ran out
1,000 gay dudes in a crowd, and 9th would still stand out
...
I don’t wana cope wit ya skills… I scope and kill
I could be robbed for my “drugs” and be tha 'dope'st still
weak but better then last line


I could go on and on about who you're worse than
But you're ahead of 9th...'cuz you always talk in the 3rd person
descent opener
So you're the only one who says "J's hot", but thug shit is played, Dot
Runnin' up your bar tab is the only time you take shots
lol...good better
Get breaked off, acceptin' this battle you shoulda been cautious
'Cuz the best checks you get are at the welfare office
another good one
Deny you're a Shawn Carter d/r, but it's plain to see
That while you wanna be Jay your verses make us all Z...
great personal i liked this punch a lot...
Wow, talk about being slept on, but I'll tell you what you need to shine

you're wack

Nah, matter of fact, just learn to read between the lines
lol good...creative
(last line to the quote)
They're probably all about battles, losing makes him a teary kid
Watch him get mad, 'cuz even his name tell us he's on the period
good closer

overall i think 9th won for sheer harder punches and personals, they were way more creative and all of Jdots lines just felt weak, no hate good luck to both

peace


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Compose 04-17-05 01:48 PM

wow...the voting on this is pure horrible, anybody who knows good punches and wordplay or has half a brain knows 9th won this easy...amazing...

M-Eazy 04-17-05 01:59 PM

Shut up hoecup and get off his dick. I already won this anyway. 3-0=KO...So your vote doesnt matter.

Compose 04-17-05 02:04 PM

lol...im not on his dick, the sad thing is you know he won deep in your head...compare your "wordplay" to his...really deeply compare your personals and punches to his and tell me he didnt win so i could understand how much you lie

Adam 04-17-05 02:30 PM

Voted For: 9th Degree

I read ya other battle, tha herbs you face stay old
They compare 9th Degree to being hot(burnt), when 9 degrees is cold
Blah...didn't flow good...6/10
Even if I had tha wackest lines, I would get merits still
Cause 9th degree riding my dick like a Ferris wheel
Self Glory = gay....4/10
I scare and kill, You don’t elevate cause yo thread gets replies
Cause only side ya record will escalade, is on the right side
Played...nice attempt though...6/10
You could “B COMING” for me, and still wouldn’t “ROCK” me “FELLA”*
I’ma wait til tha end of my sentence’, before I ‘DOT’ ya fella
Fella...fella...?....no.....3/10
Go acapella….Fuck a limelight, ya bulb ran out
1,000 gay dudes in a crowd, and 9th would still stand out
Would that make him straight then? Worded wrong...4/10
I don’t wana cope wit ya skills… I scope and kill
I could be robbed for my “drugs” and be tha 'dope'st still
Self glory again....4/10

27/60




I could go on and on about who you're worse than
But you're ahead of 9th...'cuz you always talk in the 3rd person
good peronal, pretty funny...6/10
So you're the only one who says "J's hot", but thug shit is played, Dot
Runnin' up your bar tab is the only time you take shots
good punch...nice meta...8/10
Get breaked off, acceptin' this battle you shoulda been cautious
'Cuz the best checks you get are at the welfare office
Eh...5/10
Deny you're a Shawn Carter d/r, but it's plain to see
That while you wanna be Jay your verses make us all Z...


*snore* ...huh, what? oh, sorry bout that.

This was fuckin' hilarious....9/10

Wow, talk about being slept on, but I'll tell you what you need to shine

you're wack
Nah, matter of fact, just learn to read between the lines
Now...that's original...good punch...8/10

Quote:
Originally Posted by J Dot, in reference to strobe
I send him about 3-4 PM's a week.


They're probably all about battles, losing makes him a teary kid
Watch him get mad, 'cuz even his name tell us he's on the period
Good name play....6/10

42/60


One sided battle...9th took it with better thought out punches. J Dot your verse had to much Self Glory and the one punch was pretty played. Seen way better out of you...no hate..

9th your verse was fuckin' hilarious...nice drop..

v/9th Degree

Nynth Degree 04-17-05 02:32 PM

I give it 30 seconds before Dot complains about that. But he has good reasons...

1. Red Bull kicked him out of TE
2. J Dot's just wack like that

Adam 04-17-05 02:51 PM

LyricalMa$tamind missed a line in his breakdown on 9th's verse too..

YOUNG_CITY 04-17-05 02:57 PM

Voted For: J DOT

This battle was mad wack but I think JDOT took it. No hate to you 9th Degree, I just felt your structure was way too stretched for me, and I felt your flow was way off in this one. JDOT, not all your punches were good, they couldve been a lot better, but I'ma say you took this one because of consistency and good wordplay. 9th Degree, your rhyming was a lil off in this one. You should work on that, but other than that, I felt your drop was pretty descent, but I'ma have to stick with JDOT in this one. I think he took it.

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