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^^ Alright thanx.............................................
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This was feedback posted for Da King
Da king-He got this just by using words that rhyme an understandable punchez(seem sorta used before?).
This battle didnt really have any good personals,but Ghand did have a lil personals...but..lacked any structure or Shit!!!...Didnt rhyme doggz..Hah!! Best line-*so please stop thinking that you downing me cause i'm the king you was just holding the crown for me* (only cuz Playa Fly said somethan real close to it!?!) Hah!!! Fuck a vote!!!!..this is FeedBack!! Keep elevatin..both of yallz...cuz this battle couldve been better!!! |
Voted For: Mahatma Ghand
Wow Im Enjtoying this one sided battle thing going on rii hurr King You came very short and very basic i think you need to reconsider what you do or How you do it bcuz that verse jus wasnt kickin to me I think you are jus tryin to Make it ryme instead of makin it have a good effect on your oppenent and if you cant do both then i think you need to reconsider your career Ghand Well mayn you Did very well Infatc i dont see why you wasted such a good verse on such an easy battle ?....... N e ways i feel all and/or most of your punchez connected with ease and flourishness........ RTF In the link in my sig PLEASE IM BEGGING YOU |
Voted For: Mahatma Ghand
holy shit........ mahatma ghand had this shit.. his verse owns... vocab=8/10 structure=7/10 punches=10/10 good battle next time be better.. |
uppin........................................come on mutha fuckaz vote
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This was feedback posted for Mahatma Ghand
chekcing in to see how the voting is going so far.
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uppin.............................................
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Voted For: Mahatma Ghand
easy battle............ mahs punches wer funny and actually hit, structure was ok, overall good flow....The personals won him this battle. king your punches didnt realy make sense so didnt hit, i suggest you hit up a tutorial.. no hate rtf in sig. |
aight what eva. i read yo battles and they wasn't that damn hot either. fuck a tutorial. since u so good why don't you school me. oops u probably aint got time since you on mahs dick. uppin........................vote mutha fuckaz. and think about yo vote. o yea my punches did make sense. u niggas just not advanced.
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Voted For: Mahatma Ghand
Diz Wuz An EZ Battle 2 Judge On, Mahatma Ghand Came Strong An Itz Evidental In Da Verses, Just Look At Dem An You'll C I Dont Need 2 Explain Why He Won, But HE HAD PUNCHEZ, HE HAD PERSONALZ AN HIS SHIT RHYMED, So He Gets Mah Vote. Pleaze Return Da Vote In My Signature |
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