Voted For: Stanza

Mahatma Ghand:


Man your punches ain't effecting me, there too light weight*
My hot punches will literally take ove your flow'z having you dehydrate

^ weak...4/10

This kat really think he's hot?, kid posted "suicide", he should've done it to himself*
No one post an reply in 2 months, should've put them whack rhymes on the bookshelf

^No...3/10

Man how you got in the dopest crew around? And you havent established sikness?*
Look at this kid sig, He busting caps, but i'm standing wondering where the bullets went.*

^ Sickness and went don't rhyme dumbass...2/10

You no where near elevation, cause kid you more weaker than them abortion kids
................If you and me had the same culture, still you wouldnt win this race bitch

^ Weak set-up and weak punch...4/10

like in your sig. This is far from over, your hotness is fading like a sunset*
You should never gamble with me, cause you just lost your Win like roulette

^Nope...not workin...4/10

Overall, 17/50...terrible verse man...punches were garbage, personals suck...you really need elevation bad...



Stanza:

Ghand think cuz he MaddCow his flow is sick
I seen betta combo'z & controls comin from my PS2 joystick

^Decent opener, coulda been better...6/10

Watch This Old Time Preacher Get Murked with Soul
he's The Only kid In Pre-K tryna get the Triangle in the Hole

^Hmm...decent punch I guess...kinda played...5/10

This Guy Thought he was a DJ bcuz he wasDick Jumping
Well We Know Now what You Would Do for a Klondike bar

^LMAO...funny shit, but didn't rhyme...6/10 because I laughed

Only Three bars Completed And U Already Starting To Sweat
Ghand get to far in Debt Now Its His Life he wants to bet?

^Nope...weak...4/10

Wait Lemme stop B4 I have to Drop and roll This wack Punk
Bcuz this nigga can Do 5 bars[b]-& I Still cant Get [b]drunk[b/]

^Best line of your verse...nice closer...7/10

28/50

Both verses could use work, but Stanza came harder in his verse than that other kid...v/ stanza

Thanx for Voting

and droppin some suggestion on how i could elevate Thanx

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Uppin for some REAL votes LOL .............................

Voted For: Stanza

Stanza
Ghand think cuz he MaddCow his flow is sick
I seen betta combo'z & controls comin from my PS2 joystick
Eh....not really feeling it..
Watch This Old Time Preacher Get Murked with Soul
he's The Only kid In Pre-K tryna get the Triangle in the Hole
Ha, decent punch...
This Guy Thought he was a DJ bcuz he wasDick Jumping
Well We Know Now what You Would Do for a Klondike bar
Only time intentional misrhyming is OK is if there's a massive punch getting set up on the second line...not this one..
Only Three bars Completed And U Already Starting To Sweat
Ghand get to far in Debt Now Its His Life he wants to bet?
Alright...
Wait Lemme stop B4 I have to Drop and roll This wack Punk
Bcuz this nigga can Do 5 bars[b]-& I Still cant Get [b]drunk[b/]
Alright, this was a pre-defensive punchback...
Well I was gonan stop at five but damn This merkin Shit is fun
Lemme know when U Want me to Stop The bullets in da Gun
Good finish...

Ghand
Man your punches ain't effecting me, there too light weight*
My hot punches will literally take ove your flow'z having you dehydrate
Played, but OK rhyme...
This kat really think he's hot?, kid posted "suicide", he should've done it to himself*
No one post an reply in 2 months, should've put them whack rhymes on the bookshelf
OK personal..
Man how you got in the dopest crew around? And you havent established sikness?*
Look at this kid sig, He busting caps, but i'm standing wondering where the bullets went.*
Good..
You no where near elevation, cause kid you more weaker than them abortion kids
................If you and me had the same culture, still you wouldnt win this race bitch
Filler was awful, punch was forced..
like in your sig. This is far from over, your hotness is fading like a sunset*
You should never gamble with me, cause you just lost your Win like roulette
Terrible closer...played as fuck..

Stanza- You kind of alternated with lines that were hot and lines that were stale, but you had a solid enough finish and more consistency. You didn't really murk Ghand, but you did take this one.

Ghand- Some good personals...lines 4-8 were alright, but I really wasn't feeling the rest of your verses. Just my opinion. Personals were working fine for you, you should have strictly stuck with those, but work on the closer...

Voted For: Stanza

nice battle
winner- stanza

Ghand think cuz he MaddCow his flow is sick
I seen betta combo'z & controls comin from my PS2 joystick

nice wordplay,

Watch This Old Time Preacher Get Murked with Soul
he's The Only kid In Pre-K tryna get the Triangle in the Hole

lol funny, good shit

This Guy Thought he was a DJ bcuz he wasDick Jumping
Well We Know Now what You Would Do for a Klondike bar

lol strong punch

Only Three bars Completed And U Already Starting To Sweat
Ghand get to far in Debt Now Its His Life he wants to bet?

decent punch, wasnt to strong, no multies

Wait Lemme stop B4 I have to Drop and roll This wack Punk
Bcuz this nigga can Do 5 bars[b]-& I Still cant Get [b]drunk[b/]


[b]~Finsher~

Well I was gonan stop at five but damn This merkin Shit is fun
Lemme know when U Want me to Stop The bullets in da Gun

finisher was ok, not great

Man your punches ain't effecting me, there too light weight*
My hot punches will literally take ove your flow'z having you dehydrate

ur not dissin him, ur making urself look good

This kat really think he's hot?, kid posted "suicide", he should've done it to himself*
No one post an reply in 2 months, should've put them whack rhymes on the bookshelf

this is a good punch

Man how you got in the dopest crew around? And you havent established sikness?*
Look at this kid sig, He busting caps, but i'm standing wondering where the bullets went.

why u gon bring up that he in da best crew? dat is a compliment


You no where near elevation, cause kid you more weaker than them abortion kids
................If you and me had the same culture, still you wouldnt win this race bitch

decent punch


like in your sig. This is far from over, your hotness is fading like a sunset*
You should never gamble with me, cause you just lost your Win like roulette

finisher was aight, could have been stronger

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uppin dis battle fuckers..........................

Voted For: Stanza

Stanza- Your verse was pretty good....your punches were good also...some were a little weak ...but mostly good...your structure could be a little bit better n all....had some aight personals...but overall- 7.9/10.....

Mahatma Ghand- Your verse was good too overall, but your punches were weak at some spots...flow was off too at times...your structure was good...had some nice personals...but punches are pretty much what wins...and yours were just either weak or played....overall- 6.1/10....