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Hmmm. this was a decent drop...
It was an okay , 'diss' ... think you could have done alot better Your structure was okay maybe nextime you can try to match up your bars feeling was good , i can see this took a little effort to do . Had a couple nice punchlines , couple nice multies, and personals overall think this was an okay drop, hope to see some more work from you advise: try to put some imagery , like better wordplay , and vocab, keep it up an thankz for dropping a link |
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ya first bar i think it was , was pretty decent but it fell off from there..
i kno i posted before but i just thought ide leave more feed....... |
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