RapVerse.com Community - Yung Wun vs Effect

Voted For: Yung Wun

Word of advice, the finish him, heatin up and TKO shit is played, it really shortchanges your free..
Good multis, played in some parts, but good spit overall..

Shuttup! AND STAY QUIET, bitch, FUCK A STAGE RIOT,
Ill make you 'stay away from the beef' LIKE a SUBWAY DIET!
Nice...
DUCK when I BLAZE PILOTS cuz my GATS BLASTIN KIDS,
My 'delivery is so perfect' my 'birth' was CONTRACTIONLESS!
Set-up was eh, second line wasn't a punch, but still good..
You cant HANDLE MY SCRIPTURE so Ima DISMANTLE YA FIGURE,
Dominate? Ima destroy ya crew in 1 Shot like a FAMILY PICTURE!
Nice...
So Ima STAB U WIT KNIVES until it becomes a CAPITOL CRIME,
Bustin ya 'seed in the ground' is the only way u 'cum-up wit NATURAL RHYMES!' (LMFAO)
Eh....not really feeling this..

Im somethin you needa get USED TO or get BRUISED BLUE,
Shiit, the 'River' has more 'Natural Flow' than YOU DO!
Played, but ok wording...
You couldnt elevate wit a MAGICAL CARPET, FAG GO N' PARK IT,
Before I smack ya 'body backwards' until ya TRAPPED IN YA CARCASS!
Nice..
Kid, YOULL GET FUCKED, LITERALLY when I PICK UP AGILITY,
The ONLY thing your Natural At is ya DICK SUCKIN ABILITY!
No........

You gotta GUN & A KNIFE while I got my TONGUE IN YA WIFE, I DIP NUNS CUNTS IN ICE & CUM IN YA EYE-
But my Shells 'Make ya Chest Sprint to the Floor' and 'Heart RUN FOR ITS LIFE!' (T-K-FUCKIN-O!)
Set-up was wack, last line was good..
effect fuck ya self dilldo im so strong i could kill you by
beaten you with a pillow
no..........

your writtens are gonna be prewrittens ya brain is missin
I don't think ya should be here cuz you an't gonna be winnin
nah.....
i crush ya bars Retareded fool you always fail to impress
leave this battle cuz your mums calling u for some titty sex
eh........
ya don't even know dat alphabet your a fuckin loser
he gets scared when i spit cuz u know im'a abuse yer
eh.....
your a microphone abuser your punches are ur pretection
but my raps snap your back and leave ya wid infections
ok........
this guys a dummy i'll kick ur stummach your a disgrace
your a dyslexic you prob can't even tie ur own shoe lace
eh.....
your not gonna spit harder how can u consider yaself an artist
im the smartist my flows will kill ya in an instand you retardist
no.......
im ripping this fool stop skipping school your rap stinks
i murder everything you think your the weakest link
no....played....
so step out of line your a faggot your just a coward
when you make punchlines dey bounce off me like flowers
eh.......
stupid retard you know my bars stick into leaving you shatterd
just like your gf when i had the fuckin bitch battered
eh.....
you an't a rapper your just a dick you can't speak
everyone knows ur weak cuz u stand out like a freak
no....
your just to damn basic face it your need to wake up
you've just gave up im about to blow this fake up
eh.....
your a loose cannon why the hell are you still breathin
nobody likes ya man after this you really should be leavin
eh.....
young wun ya sound like ur from hong kong you fag
i bet you live in a fuckin gutter wid a binliner bag
ok.....
your rappings wack my skill is just plain better den yours
your the whore of rap when ya spit you don't get an aplause
no....

Effect, need some work on your set-ups, there's no connection between your verses, and if feels like you're just throwing random punches...

RTF