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Aye Marv come on mayne PLEASE RTF all my battles getting slept on
and Im winning all of em Easilly so thats why i dont understand why ppl dont drop votes in it You dont even have to have a Long explanation .....Jus like a basic explanation like a paragraph PLEASE DO THAT MAYNE |
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Voted For: MaRVJay1009
You killed him! Opener: da best? yea im simply,no written dis a quick key. redzone's record is like "oprah" cuzz its "win-free". Nice line. the win-free line killed em' Middle: im sick b,marvjay's da mc most of you rv cats fear. since u '0-3' afta i merk u u'll be "04" like "last year". that was a nice punch. Like the use of last year, that was tight. Closer: ........trust me i got guns fam if i pull it heads blown. like "farve at da goal line" i'll "throw bullets in da REDZONE". THis was a little weak. You coulda done alot better on this line. REDZONE you can't be serious, mah eagles bomb on ya like brett Farve fa tha packers... guranteed ta eat cha like cow nuts fa tha money on fear factor... kinda weak. it was iight....i guess MarvJay findin out tha Hardaway, I'm shootin shots atcha life... neva think twice pullin ya green card and get cha family swiped... didn't rhyme well at all. the second line in this punch was iight you a pussy wit a period, use ta leakin alot... tha barrel'll leave permanent time-out in tha case ya speakin alot... nothin. i repeat.....nothin Ya amuse me, fillin mah laughter as I develope ya slaughter... kidnap ya seed, let Mike Jackson fondle and mangle ya daughter... Iight, but you shouldah said son. michael jacksoon likes little boys.. this line killed it for you Marv: all together your verse was better than Zonez. you came harder with the punches. you put ore thought into your shit. Zone: shouldah came with harder punches VOTE MARVJAY1009 |
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Voted For: MaRVJay1009
OPENER - marv MIDDLE - marv CLOSER - marv creativity....marvj wordplay....marvj flow...marvj punches...marvj enjoyment....marvj he got it in all cat's...red's seemed kinda forced n dey didnt connect...verse was off so i gave it 2 marv |
Voted For: MaRVJay1009
damn this was ridiculous, i think ima have to go wit Marv even tho he only did 3 bars, they was pretty hot. redzone came ight wit his verse, good structure some decent attempts at some disses, but marv got this joint in the bag wit his punches. They were more creative and had some nice personals and creativity. redzone's best bar= you can't be serious, mah eagles bomb on ya like brett Farve fa tha packers... guranteed ta eat cha like cow nuts fa tha money on fear factor... ^^^solid bar could have been set up better tho, cuz you need it to flow marv's best bar= da best? yea im simply,no written dis a quick key. redzone's record is like "oprah" cuzz its "win-free". ^^all ya bars was good but this was my vfav one good personal n nice play on words overall marv took this wit a more creative verse and bette rpunches. HOLLA BACK AT ME links are in the sig...1 |
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