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D523 04-18-05 10:57 AM

uppin thi shit for some more votes.. fuckkkkking vote on it

Stanza 04-18-05 04:38 PM

Yuppidy Uppidy Uppin....

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Stanza 04-18-05 06:06 PM

Yuppidy Uppidy Uppin....

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Stanza 04-19-05 06:49 PM

upping this shit.. how about someone votes on it instead of just viewing it

D523 04-19-05 09:08 PM

yeah what fucking stanza wrote.. VOTEEE

Stanza 04-19-05 10:12 PM

Yuppidy Uppidy Uppin....

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Stanza 04-20-05 06:59 PM

Yuppidy Uppidy Uppin....

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Ryan Hughes 04-20-05 10:33 PM

Voted For: Stanza

V/Stanza......this was a good battle but stanza gets my vote he came wit Original creative mixed wit vocab punchs an personals wit good structure I felt the 2nd bar nice.....Kid u came weak at first but ur verse got better but u didnt stay consistent wit the hard hittin punchs also some ur lines were played ur structure was striaght......Work on those things..........No Hate..........RETURN THE FAVOR........
Opener=S
Closer=Tie
Structure=Tie
Punchs=S
Personals=S
Multi's=Tie(not many)
Vocab=S
Overall=Stanza..

Stanza 04-21-05 09:32 AM

I already RTF ...D523 has to RTF now... we still uppin for this battle

we can all see that im bout to win ......

Nice drop Though 523 Maybe we will & Can battle agian

Stanza 04-21-05 09:08 PM

Uppin.................:roll:
:roll: ................Uppin

Stanza 04-23-05 12:03 PM

We Still Uppin Up In This Bastard ...................

King Solo 04-23-05 12:12 PM

Voted For: Stanza

Watch Me Spit this heavenly shit so Heavely Sick
you never can never get in my ass with Yo Lyrical SHIT
5...NO! not feelin this, weak opener!
Im Crushin "The Kid" Like "523" times and countin
D couldnt flow if he came out of a Water Fountain
6...better line, ok personal!!
Do you smell that fire?....,..Watch me extinguish Him fast
so When the ppl come to vote they gone need oxygen mask
6...nice!! LoL!! where's my mask??
This Dude Alligator rappin The way he always bitting
D Saw I was Above his game & reported a UFO siting
7...LOL!! i like this line it was clever!!
feel like U leaning on nail beds tha way im stabbing ya back
The lost is to bad jus leave
.bcuz now "Mase" wouldnt "welcome you back"
5...BLEH!! you was doin gud and ya finish wit this!!

OVERALL: 29/50



Battling me, Stanza’s going to have an early fate
Thinkin he a “heavy” threat, but he only “light weight”
5...gay opener to!! that weight shit is played!!
He thinks he’s legit, talking all the shit he spits
But that’s not the mic that’s my dick get up off it
5...NO!! more played shit!!
Thinking that you’re a big shot cause you can use curse words
I’d spit some personals at you, but your not even registered
5...not played but still weak!!
Your whole flow is wack, matter of fact, everything about you is a shame
Your from West Coast, call me 50 and ill turn my back on u like u Game
6...finaaly a fairly decent punch!!
Stanza, face the facts kid, you’ve just been outdone
I won before the verse was written, consider this your final run*
7...Nice!! best line of ya verse. nice personal to!!

OVERALL: 28/30


a close battle............
stanza opened weak and closed weak but in between he had some nice clever punches....D523 started off really wack wit sum played shit for like 3 bars then he brought it together but too little too late......stanza takes this just!!

V/ - stanza

RTF!!! links are in my siggy!! hit one, and if ya voted on one already then hit the other!!! :thumbup:

King Solo 04-23-05 12:13 PM

*MISTAKE* i put 28/30 under D523.......shud be 29/50.....LOL!!! :)

King Solo 04-23-05 12:14 PM

DAMN IT!!! Forgive me for these posts but i am fuckin puttin mistakes all over

what it shud say is 28/50..................that is fuckin rite!!!! LMAO!! I'm stupid!!

i'm done now!! gud battle!! :thumbup:

Stanza 04-25-05 09:47 PM

Uppin Up In This Bitch ....................Ima gO ahead And get This Closed Becuase even
523 Know he lost *NO HATE* Jus sayin I Need to battle somebody Else and this battle is being sleppt on so Do you wanna get it closed ?


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