Voted For: Drama Queen

Man this was a tight battle yall both my girls so it was a tough one I was torn on who to vote for I had to go and back and re-read it like 2 times but yall shit was tight very emotional and deep um Mizz Fyre you came out kind of weak wasn't really filling your first verse and thats what kind of made me go like man this is booring but you seriously picked it up thru out the whole thing and eneded with a bang.

DQ you came right out firing your shit was tight you had great structure and great vocab your opener was what kept me reading it but damn yall had some tight shit yall both my girls but my vote goes too.........

Drama Queen

aight ya'll thanx for voting.....glad to see we finally gettin some votes up in here

Yeah, if you want efecx to explain bit more its cool cause I felt feed was bit less but good to see people voting!

DQ

!!!Uppity Up Up!!! Vote vote vote! Explained though

DQ

nah its aight i think the vote was explained enough.............uppin ya'll

^Okay, was just asking 'cause I'd understand if you wanted him to clarify some stuff, was nice verse btw!

DQ

Voted For: Drama Queen

Voted for DQ, but was veryy close, most of the time mizzes was good but had a few off parts, both had nice vocab and stuck to the topic well but overall dq came harder with dome deeper lines and better vocab. Good verses by both, NO HATE.

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seein if ppl have voted yet.....................

mizz fyre ya fam 'n' all but Drama Queen killed this battle!!!

Thanks man, upping for some more votes you kno

Mizz fyre had nice verse as well in my opinion tho, nothing but love girl!

DQ

Voted For: Drama Queen

im gonna have to go wit DQ on this one. yall both came wit some nice verses but i think dq's was more representative of the topic, nah mean. she had more imagery which helped to create a better picture. like "A gnawing sense of hunger", and "Sweaty forehead pounding and ears ringing ", stuff like that helps make ya verse more thorough and thats why i liked DQ's joint more, so she gets my vote. RETURN THE FAVOR
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Voted For: mizz fyre

ok this was very good here by both good imagery and story lines both of you jumped way too long steps along which pissed me off but whatever vocab was also good by both drama had creativity but fyre had a more good story that held me in and captivated me more so i think thats what wins in topical the better story and to me miss fyre had that hands down.
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Thanks for honest and fully explained votes y'all, you know they much appreciated!!!

DQ

yeah thanx ya'll............uppin.........................

Upping this battle, come on y'all...it's a good topic and nice verse from both of us...good read...

DQ

Voted For: Drama Queen

vote for drama

your topical had some deapth in it ma...good shit
ya imagery was real good you painted a perfect picture
miss fyre your was good you just didnt have the depth drama had