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yea casper.. u really doin ur shit
i like the diversity of the topic as opposed to your other drops .. just dont get too soft on us lol 7.5/10 good job.. keep it up |
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Hmm...this was a'ight...vocab was decent...flow was a lil off, you need some work on your structure...decent story...keep at it...
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this was a decent drop...structure was off in one or two places and tha hook couldda been better but nobody's perfect....ya verses really stayed on topic and created a good image of wut u was goin thru. stay up & rtf.1.
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Yo nice shit homie........yo i have a OM called da same thing Hard Times by Me ft.Buck.Shot and LyricalFlowz....heres da link leave some feed back homie....
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=181030 ~1~ |
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yo pretty good better than some of ur other ones a lil basic but otherwise really good 7/10 keep it up
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pretty ill stuff Casper, nice creative lines with dope wordplay, not much i can fault on the peice ta be real wit'cha homeboy..
only flaw is the hook, sorry...wasnt feeling it, seemed a little...corny? lol, no offence, the verses was right on point...an the hook dosent matter anyway, i enjoyed it 7.5/10 look forward ta our collab man.. |
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This was a decent drop.. could have been alot better.. if
you would have used some creativity.. "Hard times".. A very commen topic, but you didnt express in good wording , how hard those times were , and what happen to you in those times You did say why it was hard times , but i just felt you could have elaborated more Structure was off, it wasnt hepling the reader at all.. Vocab and worplay usuage was decent, but could have been alot better. ..keep it up |
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