Voted For: CA$per

aight, the opener from Casper was...diffrent, i personally thought it was creative an it made me laugh, dessert an fluff kinda dont rhyme, but it still had nice wordplay in it...

closer was good too, diss was right on point, humouress once again, even thom it was simple wordplay, it had a good effect....

the rest of the verse was pretty on point also, flow was good, structure cannot be faulted, ya rhyme scheme on ah whole was nice....personals are not noticeable, but neither are they in OSB's verse....this battle was more about the punchlines...in which Casper hit hard, especially with the installment plan line, that was nice...dunno if it was true, but real good shit....OSB, Ya verse was decent, lines such as: the pins & needles bar, really had a good effect, wasnt feeling the opener, an i have seen better from you OSB, for the more creativity, conststancy an humour, my votes goes too CASPER

But the pins & needles line was the highlight of the battle, i was like ''oooh'' for a second

could yall RTF in any of my battles?
thanks yall

Peace out.

uppin this yall...........................................

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uppin for LL............................................

Voted For: CA$per

checkinnnnnnnnnnnn pollllllllsssssssssss....................

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remove dat vote accidentally pressed vote instead of feed
srry

Voted For: OneStepBeyond

onestepbeyond took this one easily, even though he ducked me.

casper. your verse was too basic, you had that one good bar at the end, but too late to make up for 6 lines. you should try harder. also, the first line was stretched, and didn't rhyme, poor structure plagued the fuck out of it.

onestepbeyond. you had some good stuff in there, creative and nicely thought out. good structure, and personals really killed him. thats all i need to explain.

v/onestepbeyond...easily

ps (to casper)... dont use my name in your whack battles, ever.

Voted For: CA$per

this was close but i vote casper.....

casper came better with less lines and good punches with better vocab..

onestep- you had some goog punches but some of em were corny.. u had some sick ones tho to!

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Voted For: CA$per

This one was pretty close... One steps line about ski was pretty gay though... was laughin AT it, not at casper. His patrick swayzey line was funny, but still kinda played against casper. The ghostbuster line though.... :p wack. lol

Casper - opener, not bad the jello shit was wack, but the record makin him soft brought it back. the installment plan line was dope, and the closer ended it. You came hella weaker than you could have, so it was close, but casper edged this out.

v/ Casper

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checkin polls...pretty good osb,u merked him......

uppin for more votes yall.........................

Voted For: OneStepBeyond

opener-one
metaz-one
structure-one
closer-one

i really like one's verse, casper's wasn't bad but your lines seemed forced...ive seen betta from u

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Voted For: OneStepBeyond

ay wht up OSB, just checkin whts the polls. hang on.

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clikc FEED.................. whoopes..............

Damn...people need to have better memory. all this damn accident voting...........

Agreed. And how about some explained votes too?...