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Voted For: Da King

very nice but it sounded as if someone bited here and that aint good..............

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Voted For: Da King



Dis dude is soft hell, I’m ashamed to battle ya
Dis guy couldn’t get a date if his name was calendar
^^decent
until you used a pick up line flip on every punch... still decent, and definately beat this other cat.

other cat look at king's structure and do it similar to his, but make the lines more the same length.
and throw punches with wordplay like those few in his verse.