Voted For: evil

v/ evil

i go with evil because his shit was more of a battle freestyle.........accomplish ya shit looks like a written poem........no direct hits.........both niggas need to work on openers and closers.........accomplish u got a nice structure but like i said i thought it was a poem........evil ur structure was good........nice punches but u could work on a betta approach

keep at it........also, vote in one of my battles both of u

Voted For: evil


evil you battleing me should be ilegal
cuz your to wack bitch the scores not equal
Wack.......3/10
fuck your mum u fat cunt this wins not yours
im on a differen't level while your just bores
wack......3/10
your flow is a shambles i'll pull u apart in dif angles
i bet your fuckin ugly cuz at birth ur face was mangled
dont judge a nother nigga wack...4/10
your brain is witless so how the fuck are you sickness
after I beat ur weak verse i'll leave your ass skinless
ELAVATE2/10
see your not evil I would say your more soft
why are u reppin rv everyone wants ya to fuck off
Wack please elavate1/10
cuz you suck off all rappers ya skill is just wacker
this guys a computer nerd he's a fuckin hacker
wack still 3/10
im'a attack you for just trying to be the man
I could beat you one handed your just my fan

so go ahead write some shit that an't worth it
you'll prob bite dem lines or try to purchace it

fuckin clown my flows will keep u always down
the only time ur good is when people mute ur sound

your not on top you make hip hop like a circous
damn bitch your worthless god made ya shit on perpous

20 mins im'a end this shit your wordplay is kinda gay
why don't you just die cuz i don't want u 2 live another day
wack
you've been exstinct i hope this shit made you think
don't bother makin verses everyone of them stinks


evil u got this cause u didint waste you're life spittin whack shit that never ended and accually made sence Return tha favor
RTF
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Voted For: evil

ok accomplish decent punches and disses a lil long winded though with the verse here was too long and it killed the effectiveness of your verse also flow was off in places and that hurt you as weell while evil had a good flow to his verse with punches and disses equal to yours and basically the better flow and being able to keep me more captivated with his lines made his verse more effective and gave him my vote.

omg how could u think his played punches were better than mine I had 24 lines and he had 10 this was pretty one sided battle and I didn't bite off eminem I just thought that up them votes were wack... upping this shit!

Voted For: accomplish

i'm gonna have to vote for this verse because it had alot more decent punchlines and wordplay accomplish took this battle easy the other verse had some real played punchlines and didn't have as many lines... vote accomplish

Voted For: accomplish

EASY win. Accomplish - ya lines seemed kinda rushed, but there was some nice punches in there. Take ya time and type it so we can read it lol. Good punches, and this had a few multis in it and a nice rhyme scheme. Needs some work to develop though - some of this was basic.

Evil. MY GOD. Are you 5? I could have shit alpha bits and hads words fall together better. None of that flows... None of the punches are good. It's like you bit the worst 10 lines out of the 5 oldest wack raps you could find, and threw them together and prayed for the best. God rest your pen. 1

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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=187638
hit this up and i will return tha favor

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