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actually glockoma, my first line was not a filler....if you know anything, the dude in his sig/avy is from final fantasy, which is a video game.......fuck, this battle is at
2-2.......or how bout we let the mod decide? word |
Kesse took this 1 4 me cuz i jus wasnt feel Kin's at all........
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Wat Kind Of Explanation Is That 3-3 |
v- Kesse
Kin- Man, you structure annoys me, just be glad this battle isn't voted on structure. Aight you tried to pack way too much into this bar, wordplay was there, but you stretched this out too much. Flow was off and ish. Also, punch was hurt by "i'm gonna..." That's stating. Kes- Not that great of a punch, but the personal was aight. Kinda witty. More of a punch than kin's. |
aight, my vote goes ta kesse
Kins was real strecthed, an the opening line was weak as hell...second line took too long ta get to the point...kesses was simple yet effective, so kesse gets my vote |
roflamo whatever...
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keese dope punch alot of dudes dont remember that wizard from that fucking hard ass nintendo game but dope personal into your punch kin your shit was streched and weak here
vote keese |
I Guess Being Complex On This Site Gets You Nowhere...
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meh, i didn't think it was a bad punch, just you focus too much on multies and sometimes that takes away from the effectiveness, and you kinda self glorifyed the first line...and your structure was stretched, which makes in less enjoyable.......it wasn't your best punch, it was clever, just not that hardhitting
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Its Not Stretched When Theres Multis Throughout The Whole Thing...lmao@that
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well whatever you wanna call it......its still a helluva long punch man
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Wow...multies...*Pats Kin on back* Your punch was still mad streched man...It doesn't flow worth shit...and it wasn't even that hard hitting...
Kesse's punch flowed good and was straight up...bit of a newbish punch...but whatever...Kesse took this... Vote: Kesse.. |
1st Line - 23 syllables
2nd Line - 28 syllables = 51 syllables in one punch.... = Streched... |
Kesse and Kin Ethic, if one of you sways again you will be DQed.
Just shut the fuck up. I'll DQ the votes that aren't explained.. just let people actually fucking vote. |
/keese
. . . I blow my high reading kins fucked up structure |
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