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RTF please.........damn, like all the battles in efl
include my fam, this was like the only 1 i could vote on..
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so im kinda countin on you's to return the favor...

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..ps. ive been naked this whole time.

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originality isnt really there. its sorta what you predict from the topic. I perssonaly like drops that bring a whole new twist to the topic.
rhymes could be alot better,emotion is ok. but I think YOU could of done alot better on this. Content is as allready stated, This is too close to the topic, if you feel me? theres isnt much creativity abou tit. you simply took the topic and ran with it..instead of thinking how to bend the topic as far as possible to bring more creativity into it.

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good solid drop! so many lines in here that i want to qoute. Alot of imagery in it, too much creativity for one person to handle.... you brought a good original angle to this topic. lyrics are solid, flow is good but the creativity and originality took this for you.
this line is dope!---Becoming a priest in my mind… funerals jumping from all sides
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Aiiiiiiiiiiiiiiight thanx for the honest vote Fi-Del........Uppin

Voted For: l i n e .

Aight Check It..

Valor: 6/10
I Wasn't So Much Feeling The Wording of Your Peice. The Vocab Was Alright, but Your Way Too Basic With Creativity and Imagination. You Need To Work On Structure Also.

Line: 7/10
I Liked The Direction You Took With This, and The Imagery You Put Into This Verse. Your Vocabulary Is Decent and Some Lines Were Outta Place, but Besides That The Overall Feel of This Drop Wasn't Bad.

Vote: Line for better overall topical drop.

~R~

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Alright yo let's get some votes in here...........................

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i should up this

comeon scuzz bags vote

Voted For: Valor

oooooooooooopppppppppppppssssssss my bad............

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