uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuupppppppppppppppppppiiiiiiiiiiiii iinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn

Voted For: MaRVJay1009


Marv:

Opener: 7/10
Punches: 9/10
Wordplay: 8/10
Personals: 7/10
Structure and flow: 8/10
Closer: 9/10
Overall: 48/60=80%

Overall A hot verse from you man...Opener was a little weak, but everything picked up in a hurry after that...Personals and plays on his name were hot, along with your punches

SoLo:

Opener: 8/10
Punches: 8/10
Wordplay: 7/10
Personals: 7/10
Structure and flow: 8/10
Closer: 6/10
Overall: 44/60=73%

Your verse was good man...Nothing really wrong with it, but I feel you could've came harder with the punches and upped your wordplay a little bit...The "runnin shit" line was kinda played, but you did a good job wording it...Your closer was wack to me...Not a good way to go out...Good battle though...RTF with links in my sig if u haven't done so already...

ZzZzZzZzZzZzZzZzzZzZzZzZzZzZzZZzZzZzZzZzZzZzZzZzZz

uuppppppppppppppppppppppppppppiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii iinnnnnnnnnnnnnn

..........................................*bump*.. .......................................

Voted For: MaRVJay1009

Aight Check It..

.::MarvJay1009::.

IP:


in a few i should c alot of deals,u pre write i dont n im hotta still.
solo broke his pockets like da "white house" he aint gota "bill".
Nice Try For Meta, but Has Nothing To Do With King Solo...So It Was A Filler. 3/10
u da vet on dis month way da go,yea probly da best in da UK.
but hold up listen fruit cake,im 1009 times nicer than yOU,K!
This Was Just Horrid To Me...2/10
wastin ya time u cant rap why go buy a couple new beats.
solo's wack like da "first 7 days in april" yea dis "fools-weak".
I Liked This..Pretty Decent..7/10
ur 2 sweet! fag "sit down" cuzz i really cant "stand" homo's.
not da "star wars cat" i'll cut off ya limbs n beat u wit ya "hands-solo".*
Liked This Also..Decent Punch/Meta..7/10
u all text only time u were in da "booth" u "confessin da preist".
i'll put ya "heart in da air" since u got trouble "catchin da beat".
Liked Fasho..6/10
fam u neva was KiNG neva see u stand on da throne.
y's ya name SOLO u need crews u like "babi's","cant stand on ya own".
Blah..Weak Closer 4/10

Marvs Overall Verse: 29/60

.::King Solo::.

IP:


RV Givin Birth To Major Herbz..Now Y’all Know What Marv’s Been Fuckin…
I Set This Battle Twice..Marv Must Be A Quack The Way He’s Been Duckin…
Played...4/10
Yo Bitch I’m Cookin..You’ll Get Burnt Like Ya Sittin On The Gateway To Hell…
Desperate To Get KO’ed Aren’t Ya “Jay”………”K”………You Can Have The “L”…
Nice Attempt..6/10
I Hear Ya Yell..“I Run RV!” “I Run RV!” Man It’s Like Ya Mouth’s Set On Repeat…
Marv The Only Way You’d Be Runnin Shit Is If Ya Crap Came Out With Feet…
Hm...Worded Wrong Man 5/10
Ya Gettin Beat..Wanna Name Me Ali…Cuz I Am The Greatest In The Ring…
Marv Agrees!! Now I’m Solo But Its Clear He Still Thinks Of Me As The King…
Decent Personal..7/10
This Bitch Can’t Spit A Thing..He Just Throws Hands Like He’s A Mime Rappin…
Spits Like A Box Of “………” Streets..Cuz “Quality” Is What Ya Rhymes Lackin… *
Wasn't Feeling This 4/10
Wack Lines Ya Packin..Smoked 1009 Jay’s Now Marv Thinks His Skillz Are High…
Fuck Bein A Nightmare Ya Lyrics Are Suicidal..Make Me Wanna Pop Pillz ‘n’ Die…
Wtf!??! Are You Serious For A Closer? 3/10

Solos Overall Verse: 29/60

My Vote Came To A Tie With Points..So I'ma Have To Just Base This Shit off Who Exactly Impressed Me More.

My Vote Goes For: MarvJay1009...Just His Punches Impressed Me More.

~R~

........................*humpin ya mama and ya sister*...............................

Voted For: SoLo

RV Givin Birth To Major Herbz..Now Y’all Know What Marv’s Been Fuckin…
I Set This Battle Twice..Marv Must Be A Quack The Way He’s Been Duckin…
—pretty decent punch
Yo Bitch I’m Cookin..You’ll Get Burnt Like Ya Sittin On The Gateway To Hell…
Desperate To Get KO’ed Aren’t Ya “Jay”………”K”………You Can Have The “L”…
—uhh, this 1 I didn’t like
I Hear Ya Yell..“I Run RV!” “I Run RV!” Man It’s Like Ya Mouth’s Set On Repeat…
Marv The Only Way You’d Be Runnin Shit Is If Ya Crap Came Out With Feet…
—good use of multies there & the punch was okay
Ya Gettin Beat..Wanna Name Me Ali…Cuz I Am The Greatest In The Ring…
Marv Agrees!! Now I’m Solo But Its Clear He Still Thinks Of Me As The King…
—punch was basic here, nuttin much
This Bitch Can’t Spit A Thing..He Just Throws Hands Like He’s A Mime Rappin…
Spits Like A Box Of “………” Streets..Cuz “Quality” Is What Ya Rhymes Lackin… *
—punch was kinda weak here to me though
Wack Lines Ya Packin..Smoked 1009 Jay’s Now Marv Thinks His Skillz Are High…
Fuck Bein A Nightmare Ya Lyrics Are Suicidal..Make Me Wanna Pop Pillz ‘n’ Die…
—decent closer


in a few i should c alot of deals,u pre write i dont n im hotta still.
solo broke his pockets like da "white house" he aint gota "bill".
—nope, not feelin this punch from you
u da vet on dis month way da go,yea probly da best in da UK.
but hold up listen fruit cake,im 1009 times nicer than yOU,K!
—nope
wastin ya time u cant rap why go buy a couple new beats.
solo's wack like da "first 7 days in april" yea dis "fools-weak".
—decent punch here
ur 2 sweet! fag "sit down" cuzz i really cant "stand" homo's.
not da "star wars cat" i'll cut off ya limbs n beat u wit ya "hands-solo".*
—ur best punch so far
u all text only time u were in da "booth" u "confessin da preist".
i'll put ya "heart in da air" since u got trouble "catchin da beat".
—kinda played here, seems like I seen it somewhere, but whateva
fam u neva was KiNG neva see u stand on da throne.
y's ya name SOLO u need crews u like "babi's","cant stand on ya own".
—decent

…overall Solo took this one here
had the multies throughout the whole verse
punches were pretty decent, the flow
that stayed on point, & some personas
MARV…half of ur verse I didn’t like…
but anyway, my vote goes to Solo

v/ Solo

*RTF Solo

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=184213

.......................*bumpin 'n' humpin*.......................

lol yo dis nigga skriptz has me on his blacklist but he votes in my battles..datz crazee

This was feedback posted for MaRVJay1009
 

april fools line was funny so was the heart in the air catchin a beat 1 nice just checkin the polls

.................................*bump*........... ......................

*b*...............*u*..................*m*........ ............*p*

........................*hello & Bump*..............................

.................errrrrmmmmmmmmm...........BUMP... ..................