Nice shit.....you could tackle this subject a lot better.....i mean a subject like this there's a lot to get down....i like the feeling that was there tho....this was some TIGHT SHIT....really man.....flow was decent structure was good.....an ok vocab....pretty good shit i give it a 7.5/10

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wassup mu fucka,nice shit,i already told you so

uppin bitches.....................................

yo im uppin for my homie excell....

its militant mutha fucka lol....uppin peoples and this is just the beggin of my dope shit

uppin ill return the favor just drop a link or somethin like that

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yeah enough uppin not enough feed...c'mon keep the feed flowin as good as this piece yo...

yeah i upped alot but yall gota read this shit and if u dont like it fuck u