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FlowIntelligent. 04-29-05 05:44 PM

Stop Freeposting. Cali Had The Better Verse. Come To Grips That Youre Not As Dope As You Think You Are.

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This herb listed ya interests as spitting......funny i thought hos swallowed
King of Rapverse?...you couldnt pull it off with as many shots as Diallo!!
^^good metaphor ok setup could have been better 6/10
Hate Bloods??.......but you pussy dont you bleed monthly or something?
You can write ya verse on ya bandanna and couldnt 'C' one of my punches!!
^^decent punch not much else 4/10
That out the way newb basher everyone of us know that you wack
Slobk a gang banger of course!!!...all C.owards R.un I.N P.acks!!
^^another decent punch.. wasnt really feeling it 4/10
Eleavation not in your future like popped balloons and crashed airlines
Plus you came to this battle shook since my name surrounds you like 5 times
Good first bar, it wasnt a set up but good meta, 2nd line was ok 6/10
........... shit even you said that you trash!
Cuz in this battle you like little boxes on windshields........a EZ PASS!!
^^well we all know that last line was stretched to shit, but dope meta 6/10

Overall: 26/50 (52%)

$lobK:

Your Career Is Diminished..Dis "Nerd Goin Downhill".."Like Honor Roll Students On Ramps"..
I'm Shook? Homie Went Into "Witness Protection" Almost As Much Times As His Rank.. *
You started this bar off perfect but Ramps and Rank do not rhyme, you only get credit for the meta 3/10
When He Lose..He Creates An Alias After..Homeboi Neva "Blessed" Like "Atheist Chapters"..
Think Ya Personality Is A Factor? Stop Playin Hard..We All Noe CALI Is The Place For Actors..
^^2 more good metas, stop capitalizing the first letter of each word, it stretches your bar, so then you have to make the size smaller -2 points for the noob move 5/10
I Cant Relate..With All The "Quakes" In CALI..Its Hard To Have Ur Mind In A "Steady State"..
Elevate? In A Room Filled With "Obese Kids"..The Only Time Peeps Think U A "Heavyweight"..
^^again with the capitals just stop that. decent bar 5/10
D-ICE "Melted", U Couldnt Stand The "Heat"? Changed Ya Name But Failed To B Discreet..
Failure Creeped..So I Hope U Take "Poetry To Da Heart"..So U Could Finally "Rhyme To Beats"..
^^ seen something very similar to your 2nd line, stop with the wack multies it killed the impact, You should have wrote something else besides 'Failure Creeped' ok bar 4/10
Cocky Homo..Talk Out Ya Ass So Much..But Never Once Have I Seen This Queer Defend..
Sick When? "CALIPH" Emerged And Then Went To "CALI" Wen Da PH Scale Overtook Him..
^^im sorry but that PH shit was stupid. if the ph scale OVER!took him then the ph would still be there. And Overtook Him & Queer Defend do not rhyme. Him and Defend dont even rhyme. And you think youre verse was better with 2 non rhyming bars 2/10

Overall: 19/50 (38%)


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