verbal got tha hottest sig...ace in the hole...thats hot if u know poker

Kin's multis were WAAY too forced to be effective, Typical was more creative with his shit, and the flow was smooth.........[/QUOTE]



what was it u were saying ethics?

Voted For: Kin*Ethic™

damn this verse was dope good wordplay structre was good also vocab great flow was pretty good i cant be mad at this nice piece here multies crazy

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Voted For: Kin*Ethic™

im voting for u man not because of ya punches just becasue he was wack n u was more complex. Theirs nothingwrong wit ya structure as the multies flow nice but wot I didnt understand is why are u highlighting parts in the same punch that don't even correlate with eachother?? ya style is cool though and i think you just need to improve on the way you incorparate things into your verse.peace

typical man your verse was just wack allover,no funny punches,no concepts, and no strong wordplay, even though ya opponent didnt use it, that could u've been u r advantage. Elevate a bit more before u take on dudes like him ite.peace

I Highlighted THe Multis LMAO....

And Typical What Were You Saying??? Dumbass

Voted For: Kin*Ethic™

kin won this..he had a more creative verse, beta flow & structure,wasnt feelin the caps n shit...made it hard to read, but u had the better punches.

ova cat cudnt make as basic punch, verse was kinda basic..
need to upp ya game..jus elevate

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ur proud that a nigga wit a 2-2 rec voted for u...congradulations...
da illest...
if im so whack set up a battle

lmao@this ... anyways uppin for this to be over again

uppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp pppn

Voted For: Kin*Ethic™

o.k average battle really but not bad....

kin - o.k man you bring alot of multi's to ya verse and im feelin that and ur structure doesn't bother me as long as its simple enough to flow to which its is, ya flow was dope, flawless due to the strong multis, however i think your punches lacked in places due to insertin these multis, the pokemon line was abit of a none event didnt mean much, not really a play on his name cos your only usin part of it, but overall it was a nice verse i liked the closer in both ya first and third bars.....

typical - o.k man first off ya structure is a little out but blah its flowin to me mostly, opener is not bad but not great either heard this concept before and the closer was quite creative and avoided bein played, but between that it all went wrong ya punches just weren't hittin just thought ya fell off, again plenty of multi's makin it a gud read but basically kin got ya here

verdict - kin gets this on the whole it was a beta all round verse, just thought i'd leave some decent feed for both

please can ya both return the fav on the link below seein as i did take some time on this, thx
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...127224&posted=1

Thanks For Voting... Ill Return Votes Once I Get My Computer Back Up

Voted For: Typical

Put ya |Mouth-InA-Spin| once blood |Spouts-&Ya-Cringe| Cuz after this u 'Wont See Typical' Like kids lifting large |Amounts-InA-Gym!| I |Doubt-UCan-Win| Cuz my punches 'Change Typical' & literally put him |Out-OnA-Limb!!|
Ill |Refire-Things-To-Smoke-Tha-Man-After| I |Rewire-Machines-To-Poke-A-Man-Faster!| .. Punches |Choke-This-Mans-Laughter| & will quickly 'Put An End To Pica' like a |Retiring-Pokemon-Master!!|
OMG.....THIS HAS GOT TO BE THE WORST STRUCTURE EVER
I WOULD BREAK DOWN LINES BUT I CANT EVEN GET IN BETWEEN YA SHIT....SO ILL JUST BREAK IT DOWN HERE.
THAT GYM OPENER WAS WACK...
THE POKEMan LINE WAS GOOD BUT, HOW OLD ARE YOU?
THE CLOSER WAS A STATEMNT AT BEST....NO PERSONALS, NO HARD PUNCHES AND YA STRUCT FUCKED THE FLOW UP TO THE POINT THAT I HAD TO READ THIS LINE BY LINE,
NO HATE, CUZ I CAN TELL YA GOOD BUT....WTF? WITH YA ORGANIZING?
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im swinging to rock ya chin, like we were in a brawl
so da only multi's u spit: r pieces of ur jaw!
THIS WOULDA BEEN WACK HAD KIN NOT CAME OUT SPITTING ALL TYPES OF MULTIS, NOW ITS A GOOD PERSONAL
ill devise him an edit: put his demise to my credit
i graduated: but never took kindly to ethics
DECENT BAR ANOTHER PERSONAL
The only thing i got alot of: is money n guts
i cereal kill, cuz wat u ‘post’: is ‘honey n nuts
peace
CUTE, BUT NOT HARD HITTING
ill eat u on a desserted island with my recital mastery
so i could point at ur avy and say my rhymes r ur final fantasy
EHH,
watch ur wishs turn to sand in an elegant breeze cuz ur delicate speach
never had a fishs chance in a pelicans beak
THIS IS THE DOPEST BAR IN THE BATTLE...
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TYP WINS FOR HAVING SOME PERSONALS AND GOOD PUNCHES
KIN SHOUDLNT BE ALLOWED TO USE STRUCTURE LIKE THAT
BUT IF HE FIXES IT HE'LL BE NICE

Wow This Site Is The Most Newbish Ever.. A Battle Should Be Read Line By Line Anyways Dumbass ..

I Mean C'mon How Do People Vote Based On Structure Roflmao .. This Is Ridiculous

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checkin the polls for my home-dizzle Kin*Ethic lol...OG run shit

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checkin, kin takes'er easily......................