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Voted For: Lil Roach
LMAO man that was a fuckin hilarious flow da illest-shiiiiiiiiiit bitch up yo vocab and up everything hoe. yo flow is ridiculous and that shit dont even make sense. you must be called da illest cuz you make everybody throw up when they hear yo rhymes cuz they SUCK roach- LMAo yo openeer was funny as hell....but come at him dont make fun of his girl. yo flow was iight and yo ender was tight and funny |
Voted For: da Illest!!
-da Illest!!- If you thought you was gunna win then im sorry to diminish ya hopes I don't understimate cats but 4 days?? r u some kind of joke... ^^^^ 9/10 hahaha... good opener and personal Don't get cocky or you'll feel my knuckles like my name was sonic.. i hope they vote this but if they don't its coz its got ya name on it ^^^^ 8/10 like the wordplay in first line... second line was a decent hit Lil roach is a faggart, a dumb prik who should stop wit the rhymes dude u can't call me dumb coz im not the one who posts 4 days fa 6 lines.... ^^^^ 7/10 good hit and closer... but you already mentioned the 4 days 24/30 = %80 -Lil Roach- nigga snap crackle and pop ya ass or stomp on like you was a beatle// u post n bitch slapped wanting a battle so now i'm bout ta slaughter u like were cattle// ^^^^ 7/10 didnt like the first line... second line was ok i'm a pirate kill'n u wit a paddle so now i'm riden ya girl like she's a horse w/o saddle// i'm baby'n ya ass by given you a rattle, so tell on me ya tiddle taddle// ^^^^ 7/10 good first line... wasnt feeling the second line... sorry i'm suckn ya gurls tities while u suck on a bottle// so i'm put'n yo ass ta sleep while me and yo gurl cuddle, i'm done so dont cry a puddle// ^^^^ 8/10 good closer... second line a little stretched 22/30 = %73 Vote: da Illest!! **no hate to either of you, just honest opinion** http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=189109 ^^^^^^need some honest votes^^^^^^ |
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Voted For: da Illest!!
Imma go wit illest merely because his verse rhymed....I meaned if you're gonna rap you need rhyme....and u got it illest...good work kid....ok....rtf in my battle vs. Metaphor v/Illest...for flow and rhyme and punches...rtf man! Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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