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Voted For: lyricalflowz
lyricalflowz - Good spit man, your punches are sick and your wordplay was good. You had a good flow also. Best Line - Thinking you hot, but your not, dawg Really someone needs to slap you You always got the "Crowd Clappin" cuz there always "Shooting at you" lmao Worst Line - Homie capitalizes the first letter in ever word in his verse, thats whack Because USING CAPS is the only way your WORDS HAVE A BIG IMPACT (you did it also, so are you claiming your whack?...) Solo - Good spit man, had good wordplay and your punches was hot, had a good flow too. Best Line - Return Bout!! History Repeats Ya Lookin To Get Scratched Like Mixin Decks… I Mean Truth Is The Only Talent Ya Ever Shown Is When Ya Scriptin Checks…* Worst Line - “King Solo I’ll Kill Ya”…The Best You Can Do, I Admit Ya Attempts Are Bold… It’s a Shame That I Gotta Ice Ya Ass In This Battle..But Yo, The Game Is Cold… OVERALL - Good battle, both came with pure heat, but my vote goes to lyricalflows. He had the better wordplay and stronger punches. Solo, your startin' to fall off since your comeback, wasnt really fealin that verse. Vote - lyricalflowz |
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Voted For: lyricalflowz
solo: A decent verse. The main thing it lacks is hard hitting punches. Some was self glorification (a no-no in battles), and some just didnt cut it in a battle situation. It flowed alright and the structure was original... Just the punches.... -_- LF: Two or three nice lines. the rest were nothing to go "ooo" at, but were more than substantial, nonetheless. Metaphors and similes made the verse more interesting than solo's. Flow was fine. Nothing wrong with structure. Try to ease up on using links and explinations (**'s). People say a good line doesn't need to be explained. The ones you gave explinations to didnt need them anyway. |
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