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Voted For: DA RIPPA

yo...yo...yo....my first yrical victim....
yo da rippa ye u real be r.i.p, when my gun clip,
now listen your shit dick,u talk full bullshit kid...
I fuck eat chili* and drop u in ground,..u fucking cought...
battle with real E,bitches like u cant even found...
nice avatar wheres u get that,rip this fag,
homeless shelter is to that way,buy new crap bag...

there was no punches in this verse? the flow was ooookay could of been alot better it looks like u tryed a bit of multis i guess but yo when u doing ya verse make sure to come hard and direct at the opponit that helps 3/10

come from a small indian tribe called smack a hoe,trick//
they call me cheif beat a bitch
aka rev. smack a hoe, dude//
cause i'll preach heaven and knock the hell out of you//
three bar's all it take, i can't be beat//
so E Emagine that your better than me//

that smack a hoe / smack a dude shit was weak as hellll no hate or noting BUT u did have a good punch in there i thought
aka rev. smack a hoe, dude//
cause i'll preach heaven and knock the hell out of you//
that was preety good and if u keep on with more stuff like this u will be alot better word so keep trying cuz that 1 punch took this battle

4/10

yo my fult i forgot to add this in there can ya plez return the favor of voting in my battle i have open with christyle

link: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=189120

thanks...
its beening slept on like u'r battle was

This was feedback posted for DA RIPPA
 

weak battle

there was no flow, no good personals

can't vote for anyone


sorry no hate... just honest opinion

hey where are yall at

This was feedback posted for DA RIPPA
 

wow both off these are horrible you both need to elevate i would challenge either of you to a battle but my feedback made more sense then both of those verses combined that chilli line i still dont understand neither of you had anything good in your verse no multie no meta no nothing lack punches and wheres the personals battle was complete garbage elevate newbs elevate

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Voted For: DA RIPPA

damn!! lol ...E...must be takin E to rite like that! no serious tho, most lines didnt make sense!

I fuck eat chili* and drop u in ground,..u fucking cought...
^^^like wtf! and there were no punches at all in ur verse!

Da rippa gets this one cuz his was funny all that smack a hoe indian shit! His structure was better, he actually had sum punches and his actually made sense!