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Symbolic 05-02-05 09:14 PM

And I will too...On my other name of course. Aliases arent even all that fun.


:banghead:

Waisted my time.

Murdah.txt 05-03-05 01:23 AM

uppin this for votes yall .....favours will be returned

BiZzO 05-03-05 01:29 AM

This was feedback posted for CA$per
 
viewin pollllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllzzzzzz zzzzzzz

Murdah.txt 05-03-05 01:16 PM

uppin for vots yall com on .........................

Armada Da 187 05-03-05 01:44 PM

This was feedback posted for ::..:$lobK::..:
 
checkin polls/......................................

Murdah.txt 05-03-05 03:53 PM

uppin for votes yall com on ill return tha favour immediatly......

....Gone.... 05-03-05 04:16 PM

Alright let's get some damn votes yo......................

::..:$lobK::..: 05-03-05 05:05 PM

Uppin Dis Battle..Lets Get Sum Votes Yo.................

The Black Plague 05-03-05 08:07 PM

Voted For: CA$per

Easy decision here... Casper takes this win..

SLobk-Ya opener ruined ya verse for me.. no punch in it, and didn't really have nothin goin for it.. the rest of ya verse was aiite.. you coulda had some more personals, but i liked ya last 4 lines..The closer was nice, a good personal, but like Casper said we seen it comin, cuz the ghost lines is gettin old against him.. overall you weren't bad, jus coulda had some more personals and stronger punches..

Casper- Nice verse from you.. kept it simple, but still nice lines.. Opener was nice, funny line and good personal, and 3rd line was nice, jus the end of the bar was wack.. I liked the line about "friendly ghost" but it wasn't a diss, jus took away the effect of his personal.. The monthly rag line was good but played, and the last bar was decent, but u said Guy too many times.. still a pretty nice bar.. Overall you had nice punches, and some nice personals, especially in the opener which killed it for u.. Nice verse

Overall Casper takes this with stronger personals, and just harder punches, better disses to his opponent.. but nice verses from both..

V/Casper

Murdah.txt 05-04-05 03:06 AM

uppin this battle yall com on dont be shy ill return tha favour

morse code 05-04-05 08:37 AM

This was feedback posted for ::..:$lobK::..:
 
checkin the pollz..........slobk got this one/////

Murdah.txt 05-04-05 08:56 AM

fukk outta here looks like it ehh homie lmao uppin 1-0 casper yeye

Murdah.txt 05-04-05 03:40 PM

uppin again com on yall hit this so we can see tha victor since tha jury is underestamating me fer no reason so com on vote and leave a link ill RTF

^^..^^ 05-04-05 04:32 PM

Voted For: CA$per

slobk your shit was streched here no punches at all ill snype your home?wtf thats horrible sun thats no punch you need to work on that and up your vocab at least typing in diffrent fonts and colors wont hide your shits streched here in parts and has no flow to it one personal is played as fuck on him so that dont count either punches and personals win battles and you have none 2/10
casper not much better but good enough nice structure decent flow to it punches werent anything great but at least you had them and that wins battles personals was decent here vocab good as well so with better punches personals and just bout everything else you get my vote 5/10
rtf on link in sig

Dirty Nigga 05-04-05 05:55 PM

Voted For: CA$per

thing is this guys obese,he just adds a k at tha end....
either that or you find spellin to hard to comprehend.....
^^^
first bar had me like ''ooh''....good shit

2 dayz to drop dogg,man u sure u aint illiterite....
u let me battle u and u great aha aint u consederate...
^^^
naaah, aint feelin dat.

uh-oh hear comez tha expected,"dog your a friendly ghost"....
what tha fukk is this a contest,on who can say it tha most....
^^^
that was aight, i could see ya idea, maybe could of worded it a little better

dogg yer styles CRAMPED,u either a bitch or a fag…..
tha only time u “SHED BLOOD”is when u on yo monthly rag
^^^
pretty played punch, but u served well enuff ta have an effective

This guys in tha jury, but guy is more like judge judy…..
Dogg u dreamin,get yo fam to kiss u sleepin beauty….
^^^
LOL, Had me laughin, nice shit.

Casper:
pretty good verse, some played concepts, but u worded them ta your effect, good shit.....maybe could of added a little more on the personal side, but u still got my vote, fa sho.

Slob:
Casper? Such Creativity..Besides Urself, Hoo U Think Feelin U G?
High Losses..Like NBA Centers U Cant Win If U Always Friendly B
^^
naw, aint feelin dat at all, first line had no effect an the second is not a good concept ta roll with

Stupid Fag..Yo I Have Never Seen An Ignorant Fool This Bad!!!..
"Snype Ur Home" Away From U..So U Have "No Room" To Brag..
^^^
okay, the second line had me like ''oooh''...definately the best u had ta offer.

Casper's Waitin For Action To Occur..Like Kids In College Dorms..
Dis "Livin Legend" Makes "Dead Inspirations" Glad Dat Dey Gone..
^^^
c'mon man, u had a killer bar in the previous one, then ya dropped this, the second line seemed a little forced, but only u know if it was or not, mine is just an opinnon lol

A Win? Homie Like "Loose Holes" U Besta Believe I'm "Nailin It"..
Tranz$ferred To Casper, To Try N Win More Matches Wit An Alias..*
^^^
that was an okay openin line, i was like yea somthin hot is comin...an it didnt, the second line had no meaning what so ever

Push Me? Makin Me "Break A Tear" Is Da Only Way Ull "Move Me"..
U Don Get Pussy..Cuz Casper Only Gets Bitches In Movies!!!..**
^^^
very weak closer homie, the first line is kinda dissin yourself sayin he can make u cry lol....an the closer is just...well no, u shouldnt have used it lol

Slob:
ya verse had some okay wordplay, but the personals an punches just didnt hit

you had the highligh of the battle with that ''no room ta brag'' line, but you didnt have enuff consistancy throughout....casper came a little basic, but his shit had more consistancy an he stayed on point with the disses, so my vote goes ta casper.


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