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oops ^
i read the ''intro'' or whatever the fuck ever an thought dat was part of his rhyme okay but still towards the end ya had dat tayshaun price line, i was like ooh okay, it may pick up a little....but it didnt, too basic an please dont type a paragrpah before an after the verse, you had me confuzed! lol vote still goes ta Tony. |
Thanxx Teph and give me a link!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Voted For: .:F.ate:.
I’m a beast my lyrics’ll eat u alive like u edible my music’s impeccable envision me wreckin u OK... chin-checkin u deckin u with legible flow leavin u unconscious on tha flo’ bitch nigga let’s go Eh... i’ll lay a trigga town nigga down like tha maggot he is slap him wit verbage, such herbage shouldn’t have any kids Good... ha….this hoe ass nigga’d sell his soul for my lyrical content tony have a conscience and realize that beatin me is nonsense OK.... ya punches couldn’t come close to hittin son, let alone hurt me i could stop now and still end up 2-2 like a Tayshaun Prince jersey Nice... u forever d/r E.F. hoe get off crew hopper we focused fuck structure, even if slip off i’m right....back…. on before u notice Ha..... when i’m around u wont utter a peep if u feelin froggy then leap matta fact fuck you send ya crew i’ll leave ya sheep dead in a heap Nah..... a little advice tone’ hang it up dawg quit rap ya effort is useless meet up wit tha Q tha two of you can marry in Massachusetts Ha..... Green was a little too played and cliche with his shit, he had some nice verses, but a lot of punches were forced so the flow took a hit from that.. Fate had some played shit, but the flow was good and even some of the weaker verses still kept in rhythym with the rest....better punches on his end too... RTF, or I won't vote again.. |
Whatever this is either a alias or d/r vote n e ways I know I won this shit uppin!
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Eh, totally fucked that vote up.......my bad..........got the names all fucked up..
Green .:F.ate:. the pac wannaba always talkin bout what a gun will do.* I took OneStep out of E.F. and went 10 feet beyond you.* Nice personal... But this beef is pointless lets not take it any farther. So I'm just gone bomb one of Emerica's Finest like he was Pearl Harbor. Usually played, but the Emerica spin gives it a good personal twist... If you look at his aviator it says ready for whatever. Paw Paw hear them shots you wasn't ready for that bereatta. Eh..... Nigga you's a Kid so stay playing with the Nets.** Cause I'm gone sweep you 4-0 and move on to the next.** OK..... No disrespect you doing what you doing just to get by. "I said you was hot" so people call Tony Green a lie. Good..... Livin' Legendz straight merk leave bitches in the dirt. Your flowing is out of style like Fubu shirts. OK.... .:F.ate:. loves men yes I will clear up the rumor. Hes on my dick so much hes more annoying than a brain tumor. No........... Him and OSB is in the backseat secret lovers. The closet he got to pussy is Lil Kim's "La Bella Mafia" album cover. Ha........... My punches hit you so hard its knocking tattoo's off ya.*** Couldn't "Snuggle" with a bitch if your ass was fabric softner.*** Set-up didn't really match with second, but still good.... Post in your crew forum once and thats the most activity it ever gets.**** Blow your ass up in Dallas let you play with the Mavericks.**** nah............forced This nigga bout to bite I know he pre-write. Cause I'm posting before him and he accepted last night. Nice personal... Should have voted for Green, better personals, flow and punches.........just reverse the feed I gave on my vote.......my bad... RTF Vote switched |
Come on yall uppi fo the win!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Voted For: Tony Green
Tony Green: A reali reali tite verse. I really like all of it.......... Sum reali tite punches but u dont really need 2 explain ya punches it makes it sound herbish which it aint....... Try keep ur lines the same lengh........ But a real tite verse.......... =8/10 .:Fate:. A real good structure 2 this verse but i wosnt really feelin da verse as a whole.There were alot of really good punches but a lot of wack one's. No hate though fam.......... =7/10 V/Tony Green for having sum really tite punches............ Crew vote removed |
Come on quit sleepin 1 more vote to win uppin to the top!
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Voted For: Tony Green Tony Green: A reali reali tite verse. I really like all of it.......... Sum reali tite punches but u dont really need 2 explain ya punches it makes it sound herbish which it aint....... Try keep ur lines the same lengh........ But a real tite verse.......... =8/10 Quote:
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that was nice. i liked your lines. dont know what to criticize bout...
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Voted For: Tony Green
befor i vote plez return the fsvor of a vote in this battle: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=191608 ok lets vote now: I’m a beast my lyrics’ll eat u alive like u edible my music’s impeccable envision me wreckin u chin-checkin u deckin u with legible flow leavin u unconscious on tha flo’ bitch nigga let’s go ^^ i’d slaughter him wit my damn warmup decent warm-up cool flow, average creativeness no punches... i’ll lay a trigga town nigga down like tha maggot he is slap him wit verbage, such herbage shouldn’t have any kids decent ha….this hoe ass nigga’d sell his soul for my lyrical content tony have a conscience and realize that beatin me is nonsense decent ya punches couldn’t come close to hittin son, let alone hurt me i could stop now and still end up 2-2 like a Tayshaun Prince jersey ha nice, but no punch directed towards him get at him... u forever d/r E.F. hoe get off crew hopper we focused fuck structure, even if slip off i’m right....back…. on before u notice WOW!! THATS LLOYD BANKS AND EVERYONE KNOWS IT U BIT!!! when i’m around u wont utter a peep if u feelin froggy then leap matta fact fuck you send ya crew i’ll leave ya sheep dead in a heap OO-SHIT MORE LLOYD BANKS RHYMES U WILL GET BANND!! a little advice tone’ hang it up dawg quit rap ya effort is useless meet up wit tha Q tha two of you can marry in Massachusetts WTF? weak ending plus u bit u'r weak u automaticly lose like autopmatic did when he bit agenist me prick... F.ate:. the pac wannaba always talkin bout what a gun will do.* I took OneStep out of E.F. and went 10 feet beyond you.* danm he already won hands down how original was that... But this beef is pointless lets not take it any farther. So I'm just gone bomb one of Emerica's Finest like he was Pearl Harbor. ha nice again.. If you look at his aviator it says ready for whatever. Paw Paw hear them shots you wasn't ready for that bereatta. nah mang not really feeling this.. Nigga you's a Kid so stay playing with the Nets.** Cause I'm gone sweep you 4-0 and move on to the next.** ha nice... No disrespect you doing what you doing just to get by. "I said you was hot" so people call Tony Green a lie. nice.. Livin' Legendz straight merk leave bitches in the dirt. Your flowing is out of style like Fubu shirts. good .:F.ate:. loves men yes I will clear up the rumor. Hes on my dick so much hes more annoying than a brain tumor. cool Him and OSB is in the backseat secret lovers. The closet he got to pussy is Lil Kim's "La Bella Mafia" album cover. haha nice My punches hit you so hard its knocking tattoo's off ya.*** Couldn't "Snuggle" with a bitch if your ass was fabric softner.*** ha ha nice.. Post in your crew forum once and thats the most activity it ever gets.**** Blow your ass up in Dallas let you play with the Mavericks.**** cool.. This nigga bout to bite I know he pre-write. Cause I'm posting before him and he accepted last night. ha good diss/personal.. *******Closer****** I walk with a fist a.k.a the tooth losener.***** And I carry black but it aint a album and it will let you meet Lucifer.***** decent ending.. u won hands down easy for more original lines better focus punches more creativeness i was feeling this verse thought it was really RAW WORDNESS HOLLA... |
Voted For: Tony Green
.:F.ate:. Verse i’ll lay a trigga town nigga down like tha maggot he is slap him wit verbage, such herbage shouldn’t have any kids ^ Meh opener...shoulda come harder not gangsta shit it's wack for battles ha….this hoe ass nigga’d sell his soul for my lyrical content tony have a conscience and realize that beatin me is nonsense ^ Self-Glory...blah...rhyming ok jus the SG messed it for me ya punches couldn’t come close to hittin son, let alone hurt me i could stop now and still end up 2-2 like a Tayshaun Prince jersey ^ No diss, more self-g it's basic at best you need to step it up u forever d/r E.F. hoe get off crew hopper we focused fuck structure, even if slip off i’m right....back…. on before u notice ^ 1st line i thought this was gonna be good...but then right back on the self-g when i’m around u wont utter a peep if u feelin froggy then leap matta fact fuck you send ya crew i’ll leave ya sheep dead in a heap ^ more self-g... a little advice tone’ hang it up dawg quit rap ya effort is useless meet up wit tha Q tha two of you can marry in Massachusetts ^ closer...meh...diss = not there u jus refering for him to marry a gay man...which is played Overall Horrible to read i don't mean to be harsh...you had punches but they weren't aimed at Tony at all...basically it's what you'd put out in a regular gangsta track...which is very newb...concentrate on ya opponent...not yourself...thats my lesson today Tony Green verse .:F.ate:. the pac wannaba always talkin bout what a gun will do.* I took OneStep out of E.F. and went 10 feet beyond you.* ^ 1st line ok personal...2nd line self-g slightly...but a diss is there But this beef is pointless lets not take it any farther. So I'm just gone bomb one of Emerica's Finest like he was Pearl Harbor. ^ Self-G "i'm just gonna bomb" replace to "u'll get bombed" or sumthin like that it's so easy If you look at his aviator it says ready for whatever. Paw Paw hear them shots you wasn't ready for that bereatta. ^ punch wack...personal wrongly approached... Nigga you's a Kid so stay playing with the Nets.** Cause I'm gone sweep you 4-0 and move on to the next.** ^ self-g 2nd line No disrespect you doing what you doing just to get by. "I said you was hot" so people call Tony Green a lie. ^ Diss there punch is prolly the best so far...but it's average...but finally a proper diss Livin' Legendz straight merk leave bitches in the dirt. Your flowing is out of style like Fubu shirts. ^ lol liked this one...good diss .:F.ate:. loves men yes I will clear up the rumor. Hes on my dick so much hes more annoying than a brain tumor. ^ ok bar diss = good slightly played on the gay thing though Him and OSB is in the backseat secret lovers. The closet he got to pussy is Lil Kim's "La Bella Mafia" album cover. ^ lololol better than the previous 1 i said was best My punches hit you so hard its knocking tattoo's off ya.*** Couldn't "Snuggle" with a bitch if your ass was fabric softner.*** ^ good punch...nice flow Post in your crew forum once and thats the most activity it ever gets.**** Blow your ass up in Dallas let you play with the Mavericks.**** ^ Ok bar again nice rhyme punch good This nigga bout to bite I know he pre-write. Cause I'm posting before him and he accepted last night. ^ na it fell off here didn't feel this *******Closer****** I walk with a fist a.k.a the tooth losener.***** And I carry black but it aint a album and it will let you meet Lucifer.***** ^ Wack closer...self-g man it was going so good as well at one point Overall Started the same as fate but you picked up and done some good punches however you fell back into self-g in the last 2 bars...self-g really is only words like ima do and i will i can shit like that...jus a lil re-wording can eliminate self-g and make a verse more hard hitting... V/Tony Green...purely because his verse was longer therefore opened up more actual punches than self-g ones it was again due to consistancy...both were pretty equal on structure and flow personals were meh coz of the SG but yea that's my look on it basically. RTF in ma sig (vs E.C) within 3 days or vote = removed Vote removed by Mad Dog's request |
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