uppin this battle for some more votes yall-----------
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Voted For: Phy-Sicks
pretty weak battle but heres how i see it.... possesion... You Winning This Battle Is Like Drugs Being Legal Whoa Nelly! I'll Drop You, And Get It On With The Eagle Weak opener the firs line had potential... 4/10 Your Career On A Thread Thinner Then Asians Eye Lids This How It's Ending Done Elevating You About "Phy-Sicks" * good line good wordplay 7/10 The Fifth Will Make Your Chest Sag Like Cheap-Tits And Leave You All Sweaty............ Like Keith's-Kids decent closure flow was offthough 5/10 overall i give you 16/30 it isabove average but it isnt that good u need to get a better understanding of punches and u need to read up on a few things to get more lliterate it always helps in battles... phy-sicks... This kid's first battle was a success, but this time there is no copy Ima jack him for his most prized "POSSESION" the way JacKi-O did Foxy ^^ good opener solid punch... 7/10 Listen listen before i make ya ass become a victim victim Make his neck do a 180 and his legs start twichin not good using the same line twice on each line 4/10 I come up to ya block, click and pop like a kodak Ill put 41 on ya chest like a "AMADU" Throwback good closure.... 6/10 overall i give you 17/30 again above average u only just scaraped this win u both need to elevate alot overall ur on tracvk keeop it up.. rtf links are in my sig pik 1... lol pz |
ayyo get some more votes so this battle can close.
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y yo uppin this battle i aint even know it was still open
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get some more votes in this battle yall............
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get these votes in here yallz we need this closed.
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uppin uppin this battle is tied at 1-1 so vote it up
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LMFAO this battle is like 2 months old============
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Voted For: Phy-Sicks
This kid's first battle was a success, but this time there is no copy Ima jack him for his most prized "POSSESION" the way JacKi-O did Foxy nope Listen listen before i make ya ass become a victim victim Make his neck do a 180 and his legs start twichin okay I come up to ya block, click and pop like a kodak Ill put 41 on ya chest like a "AMADU" Throwback wack You Winning This Battle Is Like Drugs Being Legal Whoa Nelly! I'll Drop You, And Get It On With The Eagle wack Your Career On A Thread Thinner Then Asians Eye Lids This How It's Ending Done Elevating You About "Phy-Sicks" * decent The Fifth Will Make Your Chest Sag Like Cheap-Tits And Leave You All Sweaty............ Like Keith's-Kids weak overall Phy took this one, punches were just harder than Possesion’s.. but both of you need to elevate tho & add some personas in your rhymes also |
AYYO uppin this battle right here i need it closed iight
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uPPIN THIS BATTLE FOR MORE VOTES------------------
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aw man, uppin this battle once more iight..........
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Voted For: Phy-Sicks
This kid's first battle was a success, but this time there is no copy ^^^ best bar........ but its alil messed up structure wise and shit Listen listen before i make ya ass become a victim victim Make his neck do a 180 and his legs start twichin Didnt like this AT ALL.... gangsta shit is stupid I come up to ya block, click and pop like a kodak Ill put 41 on ya chest like a "AMADU" Throwback ehhh...... its ok but nah vs You Winning This Battle Is Like Drugs Being Legal Whoa Nelly! I'll Drop You, And Get It On With The Eagle ... decent wordplay here, but the bar doesnt really make sense Your Career On A Thread Thinner Then Asians Eye Lids This How It's Ending Done Elevating You About "Phy-Sicks" * ..... ^^^^ that = bad grammar.... up ur wordin really but ok wordplay again The Fifth Will Make Your Chest Sag Like Cheap-Tits And Leave You All Sweaty............ Like Keith's-Kids ^^^ ehhh, didnt like this bar at all really this is a close battle seeings that no one really stood out... both of ya needa up ur game alot if this is all ur bringin.... i guess id have to go by overall better verse and altho Phi-Sicks had the best line of the battle his next two bars were pretty weak..... so Ima have to give this to Possesion for an overall better verse... structure, wordplay, flow.... Physicks took punches |
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