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Phy-Sicks 05-22-05 11:28 AM

uppin this battle for some more votes yall-----------

E.C 05-22-05 11:36 AM

Voted For: Phy-Sicks

pretty weak battle but heres how i see it....

possesion...

You Winning This Battle Is Like Drugs Being Legal
Whoa Nelly! I'll Drop You, And Get It On With The Eagle
Weak opener the firs line had potential... 4/10
Your Career On A Thread Thinner Then Asians Eye Lids
This How It's Ending Done Elevating You About "Phy-Sicks" *
good line good wordplay 7/10
The Fifth Will Make Your Chest Sag Like Cheap-Tits
And Leave You All Sweaty............ Like Keith's-Kids
decent closure flow was offthough 5/10

overall i give you 16/30 it isabove average but it isnt that good u need to get a better understanding of punches and u need to read up on a few things to get more lliterate it always helps in battles...

phy-sicks...


This kid's first battle was a success, but this time there is no copy
Ima jack him for his most prized "POSSESION" the way JacKi-O did Foxy
^^ good opener solid punch... 7/10
Listen listen before i make ya ass become a victim victim
Make his neck do a 180 and his legs start twichin
not good using the same line twice on each line 4/10
I come up to ya block, click and pop like a kodak
Ill put 41 on ya chest like a "AMADU" Throwback
good closure.... 6/10

overall i give you 17/30 again above average u only just scaraped this win u both need to elevate alot overall ur on tracvk keeop it up..

rtf links are in my sig pik 1... lol pz

Phy-Sicks 05-22-05 06:22 PM

ayyo get some more votes so this battle can close.

Phy-Sicks 05-27-05 08:45 PM

y yo uppin this battle i aint even know it was still open

Phy-Sicks 05-30-05 06:00 PM

get some more votes in this battle yall............

Phy-Sicks 06-08-05 08:56 PM

get these votes in here yallz we need this closed.

Phy-Sicks 06-10-05 07:55 PM

uppin uppin this battle is tied at 1-1 so vote it up

Phy-Sicks 06-16-05 09:13 PM

LMFAO this battle is like 2 months old============

Sik Wit It 06-22-05 11:29 PM

Voted For: Phy-Sicks

This kid's first battle was a success, but this time there is no copy
Ima jack him for his most prized "POSSESION" the way JacKi-O did Foxy
nope
Listen listen before i make ya ass become a victim victim
Make his neck do a 180 and his legs start twichin
okay
I come up to ya block, click and pop like a kodak
Ill put 41 on ya chest like a "AMADU" Throwback
wack

You Winning This Battle Is Like Drugs Being Legal
Whoa Nelly! I'll Drop You, And Get It On With The Eagle
wack
Your Career On A Thread Thinner Then Asians Eye Lids
This How It's Ending Done Elevating You About "Phy-Sicks" *
decent
The Fifth Will Make Your Chest Sag Like Cheap-Tits
And Leave You All Sweaty............ Like Keith's-Kids
weak

overall Phy took this one, punches were just harder
than Possesion’s.. but both of you need to elevate tho
& add some personas in your rhymes also

Phy-Sicks 07-05-05 09:19 PM

AYYO uppin this battle right here i need it closed iight

Phy-Sicks 07-21-05 01:01 PM

uPPIN THIS BATTLE FOR MORE VOTES------------------

Phy-Sicks 07-23-05 10:02 PM

aw man, uppin this battle once more iight..........

TeamOne 07-23-05 11:11 PM

Voted For: Phy-Sicks

This kid's first battle was a success, but this time there is no copy
^^^ best bar........ but its alil messed up structure wise and shit
Listen listen before i make ya ass become a victim victim
Make his neck do a 180 and his legs start twichin
Didnt like this AT ALL.... gangsta shit is stupid
I come up to ya block, click and pop like a kodak
Ill put 41 on ya chest like a "AMADU" Throwback
ehhh...... its ok but nah

vs

You Winning This Battle Is Like Drugs Being Legal
Whoa Nelly! I'll Drop You, And Get It On With The Eagle
... decent wordplay here, but the bar doesnt really make sense
Your Career On A Thread Thinner Then Asians Eye Lids
This How It's Ending Done Elevating You About "Phy-Sicks" *
..... ^^^^ that = bad grammar.... up ur wordin really but ok wordplay again
The Fifth Will Make Your Chest Sag Like Cheap-Tits
And Leave You All Sweaty............ Like Keith's-Kids
^^^ ehhh, didnt like this bar at all really

this is a close battle seeings that no one really stood out... both of ya needa up ur game alot if this is all ur bringin.... i guess id have to go by overall better verse and altho Phi-Sicks had the best line of the battle his next two bars were pretty weak..... so Ima have to give this to Possesion for an overall better verse... structure, wordplay, flow.... Physicks took punches


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