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DeHotBwoy 04-30-05 10:51 PM

This was feedback posted for AutoMatik
 
jus checkkin.......................................... .

AutoMatik 05-01-05 02:32 PM

uppin for more votes.........................

13th. 05-01-05 03:04 PM

Voted For: AutoMatik

Ima BEAT UP THIS NOOB AND EAT HIM TA DEATH..'took-his-brain'..I dont NEED YA DAMN RESPECT……
dont he SEE IM THE BEST..?!?, I FEED EM A CHECK..ya.messin wit a LEADING MAN IN TEXT…….
GOOD
Hes WEAK IN THE CHEST AND CHEEKS ARE A MESS.. plus ya punches 'Never-land' like if PETER PAN WAS DEAF…….
LOL NICE..........
judging by your sig..I think its time that you PART-WITH-YOUR-BROKEN-CREW…..
hardly-am-I-joking-dude..this is misk’s 'accupuncture session' cause Im just STARTING-TO-POKE-AT-YOU…….
TITE

come on...look at ya avy..?? Its OBVIOUS this PESSANT ISNT HARD…..
like 50 cent in tephlons siggy u look like u just gave 'head' to some un PLEASENT PRISON GUARDS……
GOOD GOOD

your the example of a SEL(shell)FISH RAPPER Im the type they name ELVIS AFTER……
I SMELL DISASTER leave misk ridin a 'cart' like an 'elder' with a PELVIS FRACTURE…….
LOL
=9/10 A TITE VERSE DAWG..............


VS



you rookie haven't done enough laps around the track...
ya havent had 1 hot battle, ya know your texts are "wack"
AIGHT
i take a second to speak, i keep my A-U-T Omatic "in reach"
i ain't talkin romance, but you'll get swept off ya "feet"
OK
you have no escape, from this mass mind rape
play this again and then "Be Kind and Rewind" the tape
SO-SO
your rhymes arent "dope", they wont give you a "hit"
try smoking from the wrong end of a broken cigarette
GOOD
when you "drop", yah gonna think its tha bomb
it'll have everyone laughing, like a kid playin "DonkeyKong"
LOL
=8/10 A NICE VERSE JUS WASNT REALLY FEELIN IT...........

V/AutoMatik

Verbal 05-01-05 03:15 PM

Voted For: AutoMatik

Ima BEAT UP THIS NOOB AND EAT HIM TA DEATH..'took-his-brain'..I dont NEED YA DAMN RESPECT……
dont he SEE IM THE BEST..?!?, I FEED EM A CHECK..ya.messin wit a LEADING MAN IN TEXT……
OK...but no real punch...

Hes WEAK IN THE CHEST AND CHEEKS ARE A MESS.. plus ya punches 'Never-land' like if PETER PAN WAS DEAF…….
Good...

judging by your sig..I think its time that you PART-WITH-YOUR-BROKEN-CREW…..
hardly-am-I-joking-dude..this is misk’s 'accupuncture session' cause Im just STARTING-TO-POKE-AT-YOU…….
OK...

come on...look at ya avy..?? Its OBVIOUS this PESSANT ISNT HARD…..
like 50 cent in tephlons siggy u look like u just gave 'head' to some un PLEASENT PRISON GUARDS……
no..........

your the example of a SEL(shell)FISH RAPPER Im the type they name ELVIS AFTER……
I SMELL DISASTER leave misk ridin a 'cart' like an 'elder' with a PELVIS FRACTURE…….
good....


you rookie haven't done enough laps around the track...
ya havent had 1 hot battle, ya know your texts are "wack"
OK........
i take a second to speak, i keep my A-U-T Omatic "in reach"
i ain't talkin romance, but you'll get swept off ya "feet"
nice....
you have no escape, from this mass mind rape
play this again and then "Be Kind and Rewind" the tape
ok.......
your rhymes arent "dope", they wont give you a "hit"
try smoking from the wrong end of a broken cigarette
nah...........
when you "drop", yah gonna think its tha bomb
it'll have everyone laughing, like a kid playin "DonkeyKong"
nah.......

Misk had some OK wordplay, but not enough heat on his punches to swing the battle in his favor...some originality, but punches need some work

Aut was good on the multis, some nice punchlines, more directed at the opponent...some forced multis, but still took this one...


RTF.........


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