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Intrepid 05-05-05 09:05 PM

Word......uping

Intrepid 05-07-05 06:04 PM

upping you fucking homo's

Kawn Flixx 05-07-05 08:43 PM

This was a good drop.. nice i was really feeling it
you had lots of nice multies.. really had a rhythem..
Nice rhyme scheme... Structure was decent..
You had nice usuage of vocab , and wordplay were great..
Nice deep words you were using which created alot
of imagery ,nice emotions and good feeling
going into this drop a very nice drop..
keep it up

Stanza 05-07-05 10:48 PM

Well Its DEF A Nice drop

Dont Know Bout The color though it hurt my eyes .LOL>

Yeah But you came really Nice man Keep It Up You doin swell

Can You Hit up The oM in my Sig ..........Vote it OM of the MOnth PLEASE

Intrepid 05-14-05 10:14 PM

This isnt a pillow case so quit sleeping. Up

_JooKsta_ 05-14-05 11:12 PM

This was magnificent....true piece of art....wordplay was great....vocab was nice...topik was good...overall i give u a 9/10 fa this piece

drop a comment in my open mic below

Intrepid 05-21-05 04:11 PM

Word. upping............this is slept on

lil jj_1 05-21-05 10:41 PM

This Was Tight Homie.deep Stuff..good Vocab And Multies,and
Structa,i Like Dat Font To...all Dis Is Good Man 10/10

Ghost 05-21-05 10:50 PM

Whoah Whoah Liked The VOCAB!Shyt Was hot!Title -Perfection- Made me wanna read it.The Beginnin Was Awesome As i Was Readin It I Felt a Good Rhythm n I Was Really Into it!Best piece I Seen in A Min!Multis Were Done Good,Vocab Was Perfect,Structure Was great!Overall,9/10

H-N-I-C 05-21-05 10:56 PM

I was feelin this drop...pretty nice...tried to use a lil too many multi's some places, but a lot of tha multi's u did use were hot, so I was definitely feelin tha vocab...Good Drop

RTF on one of my links


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