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Voted For: AutoMatik
aight auto took dis auto had betta punches openor-auto had a betta punch verb shit aint make sence punches-auto had betta punches verb shit was basic personals-none wordplay-auto had more wordplay den verb mutlies-none vocab-none structure-verb auto shit was stretched closer-verb he had a betta punch n auto shit was stretched overall auto took dis he had a betta verse n he came harder wit punches so he gets mah vote vote-automatik Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Hey, be proud of that prewrite, Auto. ^And the d/r vote..
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Voted For: Verbal
ok automatik some of your shit aint rhyme and verbal had way better punches as well as structure that alone got him my vote but auto your shit was wack punches aint connect neither did personals wack wack wack verb your not too great yourself but decent and that got you this Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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Voted For: AutoMatik
Im Smashin This Ass, Torchin Your Names Bashin You Fast...... Nd I'll Take Your 'Shots' With 'Vodka' As If I Was 'Brakin The Glass...... 6...gud opener, decent wordplay!! Aint Stop When I Blast, Ready To Die Soldier Theif This Win Like Someone Stole Her..... Nd He Wouldnt Be Able To 'Katch Up' Even If I Put You On My Burger..... 5...weak, rhymin was slightly off but nice multi!! Step In The Ring IM Like Werd Herb, Then Destroy Your Spinal Cowrd..... Nd Leave Your Chest With A Wider Hole, Then I'll 'Pop Shells, Like Sick Kids With 'Tylonal...... 6...aight decent bar here, but stretched!! You Aint 'Standin A Chance' To Win Geek, Like 'I Cut Of Your Legs...... Nd Your Rhymes Weak, Beat Me? Nah, Cus Hes Bragin Over A '3 Battle Win Streak?...... 0...didn't rhyme, plain n simple!! OVERALL: 17/40 (42.5%) I feel like I'm roughing up a retard, sparring with you... Kid, you couldn't spit heat at a Mongolian barbeque... 2...played concept and wack!! Trust me, your frees are ugly and your rhymes can't bust me.. Cuz the verses you spit are full of shit, like Huggies.. 5...funny but not done right!! I doubt you own a gun, but I'm sure that you've 'packed shit' So I'll cut out this fag's tongue and give him a new accent.. 4...not feelin it!! You're clumsy with weaponry, so don't talk about automatics.. Because I'll shoot up your crib like baby heroin addicts... 6...decent meta!! I'll stay silent and still merk you...and let the weapons talk for me... Stick an 'L' in your bloody corpse and leave you with a sense of 'gLory'* 2...weak, a wack attempt at wordplay!! OVERALL: 19/50 (38%) a weak battle....automatik dropped sum ok clever lines but the closer was BS cuz it didnt rhyme.....verbal just dropped sum tired played shit that was wack, i think ya had one decent line!!! V/ - AutoMatik |
Voted For: AutoMatik
I feel like I'm roughing up a retard, sparring with you... Kid, you couldn't spit heat at a Mongolian barbeque... 4/10...wtf, wack attempted werdplay, sry Trust me, your frees are ugly and your rhymes can't bust me.. Cuz the verses you spit are full of shit, like Huggies.. 7/10...nice punch here but you had a filler I doubt you own a gun, but I'm sure that you've 'packed shit' So I'll cut out this fag's tongue and give him a new accent.. 6/10...also nice play off of the earlier punch You're clumsy with weaponry, so don't talk about automatics.. Because I'll shoot up your crib like baby heroin addicts... 6/10...nice punch/werdplay here I'll stay silent and still merk you...and let the weapons talk for me... Stick an 'L' in your bloody corpse and leave you with a sense of 'gLory'* 7/10...nice 60% nice verse here, good punches and werdplay, okay structure good flow coodve used more multies and upped the vocab...never read your shit b4 but nice drop Im Smashin This Ass, Torchin Your Names Bashin You Fast...... Nd I'll Take Your 'Shots' With 'Vodka' As If I Was 'Brakin The Glass...... 8/10...nice opener Aint Stop When I Blast, Ready To Die Soldier Theif This Win Like Someone Stole Her..... Nd He Wouldnt Be Able To 'Katch Up' Even If I Put You On My Burger..... 6/10...also good Step In The Ring IM Like Werd Herb, Then Destroy Your Spinal Cowrd..... Nd Leave Your Chest With A Wider Hole, Then I'll 'Pop Shells, Like Sick Kids With 'Tylonal...... 5/10...okay punch You Aint 'Standin A Chance' To Win Geek, Like 'I Cut Of Your Legs...... Nd Your Rhymes Weak, Beat Me? Nah, Cus Hes Bragin Over A '3 Battle Win Streak?...... 6/10 63% nice verse here, good puncehs, and werdplay, good multies, once agains fix your structure though wut got automatiks this win wuz his personals, he had good ones, while verbal didnt even have any...heres a wuick breakdown opener:a closer:v punches:tie werdplay:tie personals:a structure:v multies:a v/automatik |
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