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upp'innnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn.................... ......
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man, nobody likes us confidential......uppinnnnnnnn
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come on a few more votes.............................
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ya come on lets close this damn battle uppinn this shit
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Voted For: confidential
votin for Confidential ight con got this due to more creative punches and had a more serious approach to this battle Con ight man ya punches wdre to the point ya personals were descent i was feelin ya flow it was easy to keep wit and ya strucutre was nice and easy to read as well dint see many multies out of you ide like to see more so elevate on those Chris Ya punches were nice but nopthing seemed to be directed to con at all. ya had a niuce flow was well but i didnt see many personals that were hard hittin, you dodnt seem like u put alot into this verse. Ya strucutre was choppy from spot to spot ya had descent multies elevate on personals man they r a big help vote goes to Con better punches, more creativity BE SURE TO RTF link below sig |
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Voted For: confidential
You write fair, but you a homo thug ya whole style is type squarrrrrrrre I stall for none, so my punches is a Hit...All 4 One like fuckin I Swearrrrrr ^^weak,and 2nd line bit stretched i aint trying to act hard like u cuz u know a few thugs who bust gats u must of lost-facts, cuz imma straight smoke ya ass like blowin erbal outta ya crack ^^decent my flow straight DOPE, make u wanna shot it up N start riots Proud to be 17? Ima eat this Pro Teen Mill like im on the Atkins Diet ^^decent I'm straight monk'y-n around n u still better off Cage-n Kong... U got no dope thoughts but CON put heat to ya ears like ya brain's a bong... be-gone ^^decent Conclusion-Well...your verse was ntuin special.But it was decent.Ur flow is average.Nutin here made me say "ooh" or "damn" and that's a problem. call ya ghostwriter to make-sets, ya gonna get murked we'll take-bets/ this kid misses more punch-lines than keanu dodges bullets!/ ^^wtf?,weak ass pucnh & didn't flow one bit so i pull the trigga and send this kid into the next generation/ "fuck confidential" is this raps salutation, quick bar disintegration/ ^^well,this flowed better but hit weaker on a rampage, makin mc's eyes-sag and cleanin up the carnage with bloody-rags/ my lyrics so lethal, how you gonna spit rhymes when zipped up inside a body bag?/ ^^decent now this kid's clit is raw and hes bleedin' out the gap, im a certified "gyno-killer"/ got "caught up" in murkin cause this fools pussy is hairier than Michael Jackson in thriller!/ ^^flow bad,but punch OK Conclusion-Ur shit needs to flow better.Make it rhmye!!!.Ur punches were not creative at all.It could have been better if you used it right Vote-Confidential http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=189907 |
actually k-trini ur a retard all that shit does flow count the syllables all the bars have lines with matching syllables if there not like 1 syllable apart........learn wat flow is before u start voting aobut it......and ocnfidential this battle is urs i odnt care im givin up mc'in anyway or at least text just not my thing
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Voted For: ~christyles~
Aight, well not such a good battle. But Christyles gets my votes for a few better lines. Like just 1. it was even but i was more pushed towards his punches. So Christyles Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
dont complain? im gonna fucken complain wen kids have no fucking clue wat there talking about..........watever i dont give a shit someone close this battle
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Voted For: ~christyles~
call ya ghostwriter to make-sets, ya gonna get murked we'll take-bets/ this kid misses more punch-lines than keanu dodges bullets!/ wack opener so i pull the trigga and send this kid into the next generation/ "fuck confidential" is this raps salutation, quick bar disintegration/ nope.. on a rampage, makin mc's eyes-sag and cleanin up the carnage with bloody-rags/ my lyrics so lethal, how you gonna spit rhymes when zipped up inside a body bag?/ decent now this kid's clit is raw and hes bleedin' out the gap, im a certified "gyno-killer"/ got "caught up" in murkin cause this fools pussy is hairier than Michael Jackson in thriller!/ no overall, work harder on ur punches… seriously You write fair, but you a homo thug ya whole style is type squarrrrrrrre I stall for none, so my punches is a Hit...All 4 One like fuckin I Swearrrrrr hell no i aint trying to act hard like u cuz u know a few thugs who bust gats u must of lost-facts, cuz imma straight smoke ya ass like blowin erbal outta ya crack decent my flow straight DOPE, make u wanna shot it up N start riots Proud to be 17? Ima eat this Pro Teen Mill like im on the Atkins Diet wack I'm straight monk'y-n around n u still better off Cage-n Kong... U got no dope thoughts but CON put heat to ya ears like ya brain's a bong... be-gone no son.. overall, elevate, Christ took this one though.. just came less wack Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: ~christyles~
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Voted For: confidential
Aight, nada good battle but it was a close battle. The only strong punches and lines that i felt from both were yalls openers. But con was more consistent with his half-ass punches opposed to chris's sometimes unseen punches. Like you said, the filler in the middle and lack of creativity in your lines cost ya. Both elevate Vote: confidential |
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