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This was feedback posted for LOoNY TOoN
just checking tha mu fuckin polls. and no we aint tha same person.....
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Voted For: Big City
Ok this was a decent battle both you dropped pretty good verses unlike half the other trash on RV. My favorite line from City was How in the hell, ima lose to the rap version of Yosemite Sam Had me laughin but he also had good metas like the parkin meter line and the curtain line and the scrunchy line pretty good but he aslo had moore personals the saturday mornin cartoon thing the yosemite sam line funny only thing i dint like is starting it with dog and ending it with dog its nothing took away from your finisherand boring and morning dont quite rhyme other than that solid verse On to Loony Toon. You would have done better in this battle if it wasn't for the ****** star lookin things if the reader is smart he'll recognize the punches and most off those either weren't punches or just didn't connect. One that connected really well was What’s worse, thought you were *driving to victory*, but you were *stuck in reverse* Hahaha very nice originality displayed here just didn't see any personals in your verse thats what really put City at an advantage you just threw your verse together without researching the subject or mentionig his name in a creative way could have said somethin like "This Big City is about ot face a power outage, When i take his spark whats he gona be without it?" That was just somethin quick but you coulda done soomethin personal since you didn't have personals which are a cruciale part of a good verse this vote goes to Big City Return the favor on my battle link in sig no hate votes please this battle has been open for like a month and a hallf please drop an honest vote with a godd thorough explanation that won't get diqualified like half the votes in my battle thank you |
Voted For: LOoNY TOoN
you took this one with harder punches i think. I was feeling yo punches more. you had more and better multies also, and some of your personals were pretty descent and funny. BC-suprise. This wasnt that good of a battle from you homie. your opener was the highlight of your verse to me...wow! im suprised. but some of your punches were ight, i just dont think you came consistent enough to take this. you had some good and funny lines, but i dont think you came out on top. overall-i give my verse to LT, because I felt he came wayy more consistent with his punches and personals, and his verse just seemed a lil better overall. also multies played a big part in getting my verse. please RTF in battle link in sig... thanx ~1~ |
This was feedback posted for LOoNY TOoN
uppin this for my fam Big City....reppin OG in this shit lol
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Voted For: Big City
wow.. i think Big City got this one.. it was close but damn i was really surprised after i read his verse.. i thought loony got it.. and then started reading BC's and was like damn this dude got some nice punches and word play... the flow was def better from bc.. same with structure... personals was about a tie.. but i think just the creativity of punches is what give this one to BC... so no hate.. vote bc |
yeh im a rusty...thats expected...but if i lose i want a rematch...
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