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Voted For: AckRite

Fuckin Cunt!, A Prostitues Pussy Gets More Respect Than 187
RapVerse Must Be His 'Permanate Pillow', He Hea From 1 To 7
6...aight decent punch, aight personal!!
Whole Lifes A Dilemma...Armada's Heart Is 'Ba-Con' Like 'Kevin'
Merk Him So Hard It'll Be Like He Wasnt Born February 9, 1987
3...nah!! date punches are gay and this was weak!!
Armada You Fuckin Illiterate Or Whut...I'm Da Air You Breathe
Wait..Born In 1987? Why Ya Age Say 18..You Really Seventeen!
2...WTF!!! 2nd line was pointless!!
Enough Personals, Lemme Punch Fast & Murder This Rap Poser
Anticipated My 'Virgin Open'..Now You'll Witness A 'Tight Closer'
7...best punch so far!!! dope!!
Could End His Life In A 'Flash', But I'm Not Ya Daily 'SuperHero'
If I Cross Dressed His Record Dis Drag Queen'll Still Be On Zero
6...decent shit, nice metas!!
Sit Back & Watch My Techniques..I'm More Than A Simple 'Textcee'
Readin Ya Lines Is Like 'Jugglin Da Alphabet'..All I Do Is 'Catch Zs'
5...ok meta but 2nd line is played!!

OVERALL: 29/60 (48%)


You spittin ya lyrics like a lil boy, go upgrade to man
you aint even worthy of my punches, only my backhand
4...weak opener, pretty much filler!!
Let my lyrics destroy ya career dont fight, convert n stay
Let me fists pop ya face cuz its the only way u gettin laid
5...better but still weak man!!
Like a dick to pussy, im in n out, but you wouldnt no that
the last pussy u ever touch,coughed a hairball on ya throback
7...LMFAO!!! this line made me laugh!!:thumbup:
lil youngstah in this game, Ill teach you a thing or to bout dis
You just confused n denial, you cant ackrite, you piece of shit
5...playin off his name but didn't pull it off gud!!
Step to me Ill bust ya face,wack disgrace, step the fuck back
If you where "In My Area" we leave queers dead on the tracks
[B3...BOOO!!! homo lines are played to fuck!![/B]
cuz I dont like lil fairies tryin to break bad, thas you to a T
if u had my name, had my style you still could never be me
3...borderin on self-g, not gud!!
I got hollowtips, n Fo Fo's and no patience, ur in my site
messin wit me, ima tell u dis, u gonna sleep forever ackrite
4...not feelin the closer!!

OVERALL: 31/70 (44%)

aight this battle was weak, armada i seen ya come a lot harder in this battle ya just was droppin played concepts, some filler and a border line self-glorifyin line, ya had one dope punch but it wasn't enough to clinch it. ackrite was pretty weak mainly with a couple of decent punches but he had less played concepts so he takes this battle in my view!!!

V/ - AckRite

Voted For: Armada Da 187

hey now this battle was ok but 187 got this for better punches he had a good concept and had my head bobbing the whole time cause it was easy to fallow

vote 187

This was feedback posted for AckRite
 

You're not very good at math..

Febuary 9, 1987
Febuary 9, 2005

....hmmm....2005-1987 = 18..

Fuckin' dumbass..

^I Fucked Up DickHead..................Fall Da Fuck Back...........

uppppppppppiiiiiinnnnnnnn this to the top!!!!!!!!!!

Voted For: AckRite

-This is an LFS review-

~Armada Da 187~

You spittin ya lyrics like a lil boy, go upgrade to man
you aint even worthy of my punches, only my backhand

Nice opener...set the mood right lol

Let my lyrics destroy ya career dont fight, convert n stay
Let me fists pop ya face cuz its the only way u gettin laid

Didn't really rhyme but was hard and flowed nice

Like a dick to pussy, im in n out, but you wouldnt no that
the last pussy u ever touch,coughed a hairball on ya throback

Funny as shit...nice

lil youngstah in this game, Ill teach you a thing or to bout dis
You just confused n denial, you cant ackrite, you piece of shit

Sounds lie filler to me...meh lol

Step to me Ill bust ya face,wack disgrace, step the fuck back
If you where "In My Area" we leave queers dead on the tracks

Nice use of what I'm assuming is a personal lol

cuz I dont like lil fairies tryin to break bad, thas you to a T
if u had my name, had my style you still could never be me

Been used before but yu worded it differently..nice

I got hollowtips, n Fo Fo's and no patience, ur in my site
messin wit me, ima tell u dis, u gonna sleep forever ackrite

Decent closer

~Ackrite~

Fuckin Cunt!, A Prostitues Pussy Gets More Respect Than 187
RapVerse Must Be His 'Permanate Pillow', He Hea From 1 To 7

Nice opener

Whole Lifes A Dilemma...Armada's Heart Is 'Ba-Con' Like 'Kevin'
Merk Him So Hard It'll Be Like He Wasnt Born February 9, 1987

Sick personal...liked it

Armada You Fuckin Illiterate Or Whut...I'm Da Air You Breathe
Wait..Born In 1987? Why Ya Age Say 18..You Really Seventeen!

Another nice bar....

Enough Personals, Lemme Punch Fast & Murder This Rap Poser
Anticipated My 'Virgin Open'..Now You'll Witness A 'Tight Closer'

Didn't flow too good but nice none the less....

Could End His Life In A 'Flash', But I'm Not Ya Daily 'SuperHero'
If I Cross Dressed His Record Dis Drag Queen'll Still Be On Zero

Didn't really get it lol..I'm slow sometimes lol

Sit Back & Watch My Techniques..I'm More Than A Simple 'Textcee'
Readin Ya Lines Is Like 'Jugglin Da Alphabet'..All I Do Is 'Catch Zs'

I swear I heard this before somewhere...pretty good

Overall: This was VERY close but I gotta give it to Ackrite....he had more personal, but Armada had more punches...I take personals over punches in a battle...had these been two OM's I woulda gave it to Armada...damn I hate these kinda battles...they are SO hard to vote for....anyway rtf on any and everything in my sig por favor (please lol)...The Cupcake Man has left the building....

Voted For: Armada Da 187

that was tight

metahpors-armada
opener-armada
ender-ackrite
context-armada
flow-armada
flow transition-armada
vocab- ackrite

my vote goes to armada because he came stronger with the puches and with the strucutre.....both verses are good and both of you really good at rappin but armada took this one

Voted For: Armada Da 187

Armada Da 187 - Good spit. you had good punches, and it flowed well.

Best Line - You spittin ya lyrics like a lil boy, go upgrade to man
you aint even worthy of my punches, only my backhand

Worst Line - I got hollowtips, n Fo Fo's and no patience, ur in my site
messin wit me, ima tell u dis, u gonna sleep forever ackrite

AckRite - iight spit, had some good personals, some stupid punches tho, but good flow.

Best Line - Sit Back & Watch My Techniques..I'm More Than A Simple 'Textcee'
Readin Ya Lines Is Like 'Jugglin Da Alphabet'..All I Do Is 'Catch Zs'

Worst Line - Whole Lifes A Dilemma...Armada's Heart Is 'Ba-Con' Like 'Kevin'
Merk Him So Hard It'll Be Like He Wasnt Born February 9, 1987

OVERALL - Arm takes this battle, he had the better flow and punches were hitten harder. Ack, work on your punches and you will get better.

Vote - Armada

Lol Yall Killin Me........I Dont Undastand Man..........But Uppin Dis Shit Again

This was feedback posted for AckRite
 

checkin polls.......

Voted For: Armada Da 187

votin for Armada

Armada had better punches better structure

his personlas were a bit stand offish but his punches made up for them

Ack ya verse wasnt hard hittin u used the birthday thing which is a bitch played
ya punches were ok, but real basic n not hard at all

Punches- Armada
Personals- Neither
Multies- Armada
Flow- Tie
Structure- Armada
wordplay- Armada


v/Armada better serries of punches

i like this line the best:
Let my lyrics destroy ya career dont fight, convert n stay
Let me fists pop ya face cuz its the only way u gettin laid
(lol nice)

and this one:

Like a dick to pussy, im in n out, but you wouldnt no that
the last pussy u ever touch,coughed a hairball on ya throback
(LMFAO)

good battle

vote Armada

Voted For: AckRite

This was a pretty cool battle but ima have to give this to ackrite , to me he just came harder , better punchlines , and harder personals

Armada
You spittin ya lyrics like a lil boy, go upgrade to man
you aint even worthy of my punches, only my backhand
Pretty cool, opener could have been better
Let my lyrics destroy ya career dont fight, convert n stay
Let me fists pop ya face cuz its the only way u gettin laid
LOL , nice
Like a dick to pussy, im in n out, but you wouldnt no that
the last pussy u ever touch,coughed a hairball on ya throback
not feelin it
lil youngstah in this game, Ill teach you a thing or to bout dis
You just confused n denial, you cant ackrite, you piece of shit
Nah
Step to me Ill bust ya face,wack disgrace, step the fuck back
If you where "In My Area" we leave queers dead on the tracks
Nope.. not feeling it
cuz I dont like lil fairies tryin to break bad, thas you to a T
if u had my name, had my style you still could never be me
first bar was wack, second was good
I got hollowtips, n Fo Fo's and no patience, ur in my site
messin wit me, ima tell u dis, u gonna sleep forever ackrite
it could have been better if you said ,
I got hollowtips , n fo fo's and im not patent , ur on my site?
Messing with me , Ima tell you dis , Yu dont wanna go to sleep so act right(Actrite)

Overall could have been better, if you worded your verse differently and had harder punchlines , and more direct personals

Actrite
Fuckin Cunt!, A Prostitues Pussy Gets More Respect Than 187
RapVerse Must Be His 'Permanate Pillow', He Hea From 1 To 7
Decent opener , could have been better
Whole Lifes A Dilemma...Armada's Heart Is 'Ba-Con' Like 'Kevin'
Merk Him So Hard It'll Be Like He Wasnt Born February 9, 1987
Nah
Armada You Fuckin Illiterate Or Whut...I'm Da Air You Breathe
Wait..Born In 1987? Why Ya Age Say 18..You Really Seventeen!
Think you did your math wrong
Enough Personals, Lemme Punch Fast & Murder This Rap Poser
Anticipated My 'Virgin Open'..Now You'll Witness A 'Tight Closer'
HAHA , DOPENESS
Could End His Life In A 'Flash', But I'm Not Ya Daily 'SuperHero'
If I Cross Dressed His Record Dis Drag Queen'll Still Be On Zero
Nice
Sit Back & Watch My Techniques..I'm More Than A Simple 'Textcee'
Readin Ya Lines Is Like 'Jugglin Da Alphabet'..All I Do Is 'Catch Zs'
ROFL, DOPE CLOSER

Actrite got this whill those two hot bars, if armada came harder he would have had the battle , just ackrite had harder punchlines and nice personals

vote-ackrite

Voted For: AckRite

Personals: AckRite, his personals were all over the place....
Punches: AckRite, and this is really the most important category.... his were just stronger, more complex, and hit much harder.......
Multis: neither really
Metas: AckRite
Entertainment: Eh.. i felt like urs was written for audio armada... thats how i write too... i could hear it bein rapped but not enough to me to win this text battle.......
Structure: Armada

V/AckRite
Overall good battle, but i pretty much explained all of my reasoning above.......

Voted For: AckRite

jea jea i peeped this before. shit was hot

ackrite.:
Enough Personals, Lemme Punch Fast & Murder This Rap Poser
Anticipated My 'Virgin Open'..Now You'll Witness A 'Tight Closer'
Enough Personals, Lemme Punch Fast & Murder This Rap Poser
Anticipated My 'Virgin Open'..Now You'll Witness A 'Tight Closer'

Hot shit famz. this shit was straight fire. i just broke it down to the hottest lines in my opinion. that shit was fire. I was feelin it mos def. you had good wordplay and your shit was worded correctly. your flow was right on target and you murdered him with punches

overall 7.5/10

armada

Like a dick to pussy, im in n out, but you wouldnt no that
the last pussy u ever touch,coughed a hairball on ya throback

thats the only nice line in there. shit was aiight wasnt too witty but it was a good punch. u worded shit horrible. ur flow and structure was decent though

overall 6/10

vote: ackrite