This was feedback posted for illest freestyler
 

whacckkkk no offense but you fucking suck................... don't quit your day job.... haha! on tha real tho you had a couple nice punches but that rhyme and flow technique is missin... Take a poetry lesson or somethin to help you out. or juss go buy an em or pac cd. (or Bone) battle me! you set it up.. aftah i win i'll hit u with some more advice iight yung one
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Heres a little freestyle.....
First of all/ fuck guns... knifes are more personal/
i don't need no arsonel to disgrace you/
i'd take you outta this place fool, before you could say shoot/
I stay tough, cause sagnasty streets stay rough/
all we 'bout is makin that papah
no time for this no skill wannabe fakah/

That was quick with no punches, you want to get ripped to pieces hit me up anytime i'm down for audio or anything~

Voted For: Mc KassaNova

onesided battle...

Kas- somma your wordplay is forced but I dug somma it... likewise with multis you tryna string out across a whole line... the syllabic count don't always match up... regardless...the concepts WERE there... and you did a pretty good job on this one...

Free- Your battle seemed like your namesake... a freestyle... no complexity or wittyness whatsoever... your punches weren't all that strong... that star wars shit actually reflected bad on you as opposed to dissing your opponent... keep writin, but work on your wordin' n' concepts next time...


Vote Mc KassaNova


rtf...

Voted For: illest freestyler

close battle for real
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overall= really close battle but illestfreestyler took this one

Voted For: Mc KassaNova

illest your concepts were played your structure was horrible no good personals here either weak all around punches aint hit on this at all vocab is weak 2/10
mc kass good structure and vocab nice punches here got you this you outclassed your challenger on this dope overall nice drop your punches hit hard and were worded good as well real nice here 6/10

Voted For: illest freestyler

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overall= illest freestyler came with this one and won it but it was a mighty close fight

Voted For: illest freestyler

votin for illest

illest got dis due to a more creative verse wit better punches more creative personals

illest-
punches- creative fam i was feelin them, very well worded as well
Personals- creative n hard hittin fam i liked them man
flow- good flow nice and easy to stick with
multies- didnt see any, elevate on those
strucutre- real choppy try to make more even lines fam

good verse overall i was feelin ya flow n personals illest

MC
punches- jus to basic fam, get more creative, n harder
personals- didnt see any be sure to elevate on those
flow- good flow easy to stick with
structure- good structre lil stretched though
multies didnt see any elevate on those

jus elevate on ya personals and multies man then u got it made

vote goes to illest, better personals and more creativeness n his verse

i liked
You gonna explode like a supernova cuz mah verse gonna destroys-ya-fast-death *
This noobie verse is like a MOSQUITO it just annoys-ya-till-last-breathe**
(lol creative n very humerous lol... nice illest)

good battle fams
be sure to RTF
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iight thanks for tha votes all tied up and need more votes........ill rtf just drop tha link in here

Voted For: Mc KassaNova

kassanova: some of yer lines seem like you tryin to be complex without being good, and some multis a lil forced (quiver in quickness?). a few of the couplets were too uneven as well so didn't flow well.
best lines were probably tha angry saliva one, and tha deliver the sickness line.

illest: wasn't feelin any of yer lines really. nothin hit hard and didn't get what tha caps were for. you put ** next to yer second line and tha explanation had nuttin to do with it...until i read further on n saw you had ** next to another line....which was wack anyway. flow was off as well and overall tha verse was basic...

Voted For: Mc KassaNova

Flow - Kassa, both sucked...badly lol....Kass was better

Punches - Kass had me laughin a few times here and there...

Personals - Tie...both wew decent

Multies - Kass had more...but both didnt really have any

Vocab - Both were lacking on this, and need to elevate

Originality - Kass...me thinks outside the box...like me kinda...he got it on this

Overall: ass won this....illest...stick to freestyles lol jk