Feedback people.........................................

this was a deep drop....with nice emotion and imagery....your structure was good and it flowed well.....keep doing it

^^ I thought you hated me?...........................

^^^i didn't say that lol

^^ So you love me>?.............................................

lol....i didn't say that either....haha

So................................................ ...........YOu like me?

lol why d'ya wanna know so badly lol..........

Cause i want to know...........It's really not a difficult question so........It is true you hate me.

no that ain't true.......

Then what's true?............................................. .......

i dunno what d'ya think............

What is to think?............................................ ..........

lol u gettin me confused now.........

What is there to confuse?..........................