Voted For: Shard

retro good flow but got forced at times nice vocab but really no dope punches that ive seen here on this it was weak in personals and punches and those win battles 3/10
ok shard good flow to this except the last bar here got streched vocab is good punches and disses were pretty strong that basically got you this one in my book your challenger had weak punches with played concepts 5/10

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Shard got nothing im here to celabrate as the chief of state
Flow at any rate, here to speculate and evaporate weak advocates
^^weak,didn't seem to diss,seemed more to glorify
You aint nothing but a weak probability, not a responsability
With no flow flexibilty, and raps a sport witch you got no capability's
^^weak,where tha wordplay and metas?
In this leauge nor a freestyle state, i circulate to locate my captivate
I'm am skilled u and rap got 2 seperate, exspecialy when ur skills paperweight
^^weak punch
You got no duration i'll give a skill donation heres some information
No discrimination but i need no guns for an infamous assassination
^^kinda decent,ur best line

Concusion-Ur verese flowed like crazy.Mad props fo dat.But it seems to me u ain't got tha punchlines.Wordplay,metas and similies.Work on ya punchlines.U look like u might be a killa in topicals though.

This faggot can't have gats with his dictionary in hand...
only way he fuck up wax...is doin' missionary wit crayons...
^^decent punch,but didn't flow at all,didn't rhyme.
yea... I set the tone n' homeboy can't keep up in text...
girls n' Ret? pft foamy beer is how this runt get head...
^^nice,actually rhymed
crush his best... his strength aint enuff ta make the grade...
but yea his bicep ripped.... if he tryta lift a paperweight!
^^weak punch
its kinda strange... he kinda like Chris Farley on trains...
cuz this fatass...
dead on tracks as I smoke his intellect like Marley's brain...
^^^Didn't flow,good punch

Conclusion-Ya had some multis in there but appeared somewat forced.U actually had some decent punches unlike retro.Next time,make the lines rhyme.

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YEAH YEAH SON WHY IS U BATTLING DIS WEAK NIGGA BUT U NEED TO BE MORE CREATIVE

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