RapVerse.com Community - Re~Verb vs datopprospect

Voted For: Re~Verb

This guy wanted to elevate, ok he thought, nows my chance
Told to attempt slant rhymes, so he addopted a backward stance
^^^^this was a solid opener nuthin special but effective...
Wanted to dance, but he lacks stability like a flatpacked shelf
Was gonna try get personal, but his rhymes speak for themself
^^^^First line u came good but second was weak....
Theirs no need to hit him hard, hell..hes started crumbling already
Told him just to spit whenever, because he`ll never be ready
^^^^Agian An Ight punch but effective...
Already ya merked, u cnt spit gangsta,mommys boy ya too good
Type to mess wit car engines, in an attept to be "in tha hood"
^^^^This Punch One the best in this battle Solid...
Drag ya name through the mud, but its that long itll take me 4eva
The sayings wrong, coz this experience wnt bring us "closer 2getha"**
^^^^Ight THe First line was a filler an the punch didnt REally hit hard
This was a good verse all in all but some areas were played but u came wit better structure an punchs......6.5/10=re~verb

On this microphone i can't be beat,
i treat re-verb like his signature and 'hand' him defeat/
^^^^played punch....First was a filler to...
Cuz i'm sick on the mic and and nice when we go textual,
And if this dude hates my knife swings across his face both ways like a bisexual/
^^^^First line filler not a good setup an second line Play heard it before.....
I dun know what dude u heard about,
Cuz when them things come out, this dude's face will 'change' just like what in your couch/
^^^^an ight idea for a Punch if u rewerded it i would of said hot but u had it in the wrong Context.....
Niggas say they ain't feelin me cuz i scare them have they face white like chalk,
Dun get mad cuz i had your girl and pulled out my 'Lexington Steele' and made her 'booty talk'/
^^^^ ight tooo strechted an 2nd line was weak....
This nigga dun have the heart, how you make it to the top of the charts?,/
i'll run up on you in the dark, with the sumthin sharp, put it to where you think you smart, and then kill a different member of your family every week like Kenny on Southpark/
^^^^^was too strechted u did have good multi's but u need to work on ur structure.....but good idea for the endin....
u had some played punchs an bad structure No hat Jus work on those things......5/10=datopprospect
My VOte Goes to Re~verb he came all around harder an had good structure an punchs......RETURN THE FAVOR..