This was feedback posted for Limited Edition
 

Damn.......you got a lot better since the last time I heard you. Your flow and presence are much better. You may want to work on the words you accent though. You put a hard accent on the last word in each line which makes you sound a bit newbish.......but all in all this was pretty good :thumbup:™

Blackmage.......first thing I noticed was your quality. You definately need some help here. If you go to Audio Assistance and look at the very first stickied thread called "Day One Audio" it could probably help you a lot. You have a nice flow and you punches were cool too, but you really need to step up the quality.

yeah i was supposed to be getting some better equipment for recording before the due date but I never got around to it and had to drop with this raggedy shit i got here. Sorry but my next drops'll be better from now on.

Voted For: Limited Edition

Man good shit dawg

You've elevated since our battle

Flow - Blackmage
Lyrics - L.E.
Punches - L.E.

L.E. = You needa up your quality a lil bit and learn how 2 mix better man thats all i see that sounded bad fix your doubles they shouldnt echo so much turn them down a bit and up your flow a lilttle, nice beat choice, Shadowville productions right?

Black Mage = man you had good flow good lyrics had some good punches in there, quality was good i didnt like the way your stuff was presented tho the beat was aiii...

Overral imma have 2 give this 2 L.E. he had good punches good flow not perfect, quality could be better tho...

Vote: L.E.

Good battle this was really close 2 call tho

That is fucking rude.... :nono:

Prepare to be sonned...

Anyway thanks to all the voters, uppin' this shit...

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^ return the favor.

Uppin' this...I returned the favor Envee..........

I'll get on that as soon as i can lyrical, thanks for the vote...uppin for more votes...this is a good one L E

Yo limited Edition i don't mean to sound vote snatchin and all, but do you think envee meant me on the vote because, my quality sucked and yours was fine, but he complimented my quality which would have to be a complete lie or a mistake, he also told you to up your flo a lil bit where as he complimented mine and my punches but gave it to you in the review, and on the sum he said he would give it too the one with good punches, good flo but bad quality. Just figured i'd get you too look and i wanted to let you know and clear it by you before i go and ask him to review that vote cause i don't wanna be caught "pm'ing for votes", get back at me.

Hmm...he gives a breakdown right at the beginning...

Flow- Blackmage
Lyrics- LE
Punches- LE

It was a lil confusing I must admit...no worries.

This was a good battle fo real...we gotta do a collab on a song or somethin. :thumbup:

Uppin' for votes.

Voted For: Blackmage

ok nice battle between both of u, u both did a good job and keep dropin aight but heres my explanation:
LE- u had a flow and uwere kinda on beat nice lines no really hard punches there and kinda bored me the beat made me stay up try to throw more punches aight man but u did good u had an ok opener and an aight closer but need to work on it
BM- u had a flow but kinda hard to see if u were on beat with that beat u kno but that beat was nasty though u had two or three lines i liked and the rest were ok no punches or nothin spectacular but u had sum lines that were hot
V- goes to BM cuz he just had a better verse and betta lines though both of u is sick at what u doin lkeep it up aight but my v/ goes to BM

Uppin for the kill good battle my man......

Werd...we gotta do a collab or some shit...

Uppin' for votes...

uppin for the kill.................................

Voted For: Blackmage

ight beat comes in... i like this beat, flow is good man... nice, you could do wit more emotion when u spit coz u sound like your just reading off papar, punches are igght, flow stayes on point throught this, punches get better as they go on overall its ight an ight diss nuffint to special but nothing great so its average.

damn i aint feeling this beat at all, umm flow i aint really feeing your flow in this, your emotion is nice and punches are ight, god i hate this beat lol no offence it don't suit as a battle beat overall its an ight diss but i thought blackmage's had more punches and his flow was better.

v/ black

more enjoyable verse better flow and all around better diss...

rtf link in the sig... pz