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Kawn Flixx 05-12-05 11:50 AM

This was a pretty decent drop ,
I was feeling it, Your structure was perfect
Wordplay and vocab was good , felt it could be alittle better though
Nice Creativity..titles Juelz though but okay lol,.
Nice meta's really feelin it , made your verse really good
Flow was on point.
Overall nice drop ..keep it up

AckRite 05-12-05 06:01 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by mizz fyre
i thought this was real creative....flow was on point you had a nice structure, nice vocab usage and usage of multi's....a nice drop stay up fam


Jeah Good Lookin Ma.............You Already Know Like 112's Single

AckRite 05-12-05 06:03 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by FloMore
That was deep...



Not Really Lol But Good Lookin Dunny

AckRite 05-12-05 06:06 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Bonecollector
This was a pretty decent drop ,
I was feeling it, Your structure was perfect
Wordplay and vocab was good , felt it could be alittle better though
Nice Creativity..titles Juelz though but okay lol,.
Nice meta's really feelin it , made your verse really good
Flow was on point.
Overall nice drop ..keep it up


Jeah Good Lookin Kid......I Used Juelz Title Cuz It Went Wit Da Concept......But Stay Up Tho

SexyChick1338 05-13-05 04:27 PM

Man that shit was hot, that shit would be off the hook wit a hot beat. See I aint liar I was just busy!

Big City 05-14-05 12:33 AM

pretty hot drop, u seemed like u knew what u was talkin about in there, ya flow was on point, and u had nice rhymes and shit. some good multies were in there along wit some decent bars. only thing i would say is work on ya punches some more, so they can b a lil bit stronger, nah mean. then you'll b a beast, cuz u got erething else so keep doin ya thing.
return the favor, links are in the sig....holla at me...1..

_JooKsta_ 05-14-05 02:37 PM

nice piece of work righ here B
wordplay was tight B
structure incredible
u gots some good potential
props due

AckRite 05-15-05 09:33 PM

Thanks For Peepin @ Yall............Uppin Dis Shit Everyone Who Views This Should Reply

King Solo 05-15-05 10:59 PM

some nice shit

first OM of yours i've peeped

flow was nice as fuck, everythin went well, ya had some decent vocabs but always room for improvement there, ya wordplay was dope as fuck...best part of the whole thing i think personally............

overall.............8/10!!!

return the fave on my "RV Goes On Safari" drop.....:thumbup:

AckRite 05-16-05 06:49 PM

Aight Fam.........Imma Peep Ya Shit When I'm Done Doin Dis Otha Open Mic.........But Dis Only My 2nd One Lol

AckRite 05-18-05 05:43 PM

UPPIN This Shit Too.............It Aint Old Yet............$cream At It


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