uppppin disssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss

Voted For: Murdz

The metaphor- hmm a few played concepts in there but not to bad eggs and plays doesn't rhyme. Structures fine. It's not necassary to put "/" at the end of a line and separate your bars. Nothing really hard hitting in your verse

Murdz- Nice flow here. Your punches were more hard hitting than Meta's. You had a few filler lines though. I liked this line best.
"your punches are like your Internet service - "Sorry, can't-connect"

My vote goes to murdz due to the fact that his punches and his flow was better.

Return the favour plz

thanks yo................. upppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn

Voted For: Murdz

Murdz- Flowed good, a little bit more creative, good structure, decent punches...

The metaphor- Ok metas, though some played concepts, punches were more direct, and flow was decent...

Punches::: The metaphor
Flow::: Murdz
Wordplay::: Murdz
Metaphors::: The metaphor
Wordplay::: Murdz
Creativity::: Murdz
Structure::: Murdz

Final Vote::::: Murdz :::::

tahnks aurora and chief.... upppin dissssssssssssssssssss

Voted For: Murdz

He killed this nigga. no need 2 explain. but the best line 2 me were

you says "I'ma respectable vet" - shiiiiit, I'll be burnin'-this-liar
your wordplay's so "played out" I think your "verses-are-tired"
all the "dickrydaz" you got, I'd swear you were gettin "votes~from~faggots"
you post shit for no reason just to boast~your~status
Niggas do do that tho. Thas my vote. EZ