This was feedback posted for Topical
 

this rap would get my vote for the win if i could vote...

so why couldnt you at least have dropped feed........i apreciate the fact you took the time to read it tho....:thumbup:

uppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp ppppppppppppp

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Uppin' this fuckin shit...........................

This was feedback posted for Topical
 

im just checking the polls gentlemen. nice work fellas, word. keep it up.

^^^UUUPPPPPPIIINNN''' for votes!!!

BOOST THE CRHYME RATE!!!


s.v..............big bad c.s.

Uppin' this fuckin' shit.................................

sigh....upp stop sleepin on damn topicals!!!!!!!!!

uppin ^__________________________________________^

Upp.............Buncha fuckin' sleepers...........

Voted For: Limited Edition

ohhh limited this was dope good structure good strong feelin in this also good flow very simple to read good ryme scheam also i like how u added tha to my family then to yo friendz and how u started it by sayin a few barz then closed it tha same way dopeness this was one of tha best topicals ive read so this is your easyily exelent job on this man madd propz

topical-u also had good structure and flow feelin was less deep though and vocab wasnt as strong as his good verse thou for sho like yo concept on this too he just had a way betta structure and set up but dont fault this piece cause it was good i liked errythi9ng bout it just didnt have tha feelin that his did and also i liked his set uop better so imma say limited takes this dope dropz both yall keep it up

This was feedback posted for Limited Edition
 

Cking............................................. ...................

Uppin' for fuck sakes...STOP SLEEPING YOU DIRTY FUCKING BASTARDS!!!

Voted For: Limited Edition

WOW, this was a close battle, after i read topicals i thought he def gonna take the win, then i read LE's.

Topical, yours was nice, had a good structure decent enough flow and i was feelin the story behid, nice imagery too.

The reason LE takes this is for using better vocab and his was a lot more emotional and deeper, both had good flows and shit but LE just came hard here and i was feelin the categorys you used.

RTF Vs Verbal S man.